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2006

WHILE SHE WAS OUT script

Della Myers, a suburban mother, leaves home after an argument with her husband, Kenneth, and is soon confronted by a group of young men who kill a security guard at the mall. She escapes in her Ford Explorer, leading the group on a high-speed chase that ends with her car crashing into a pine tree in a dense wooded area. Stranded and pursued, Della uses her wits to evade the boys, ultimately killing Tomas with a lug wrench and Vinh in a pine tree. Della fixes her car, drives home, and confronts Kenneth, pulling an empty gun on him, leaving the true nature of her ordeal ambiguous to her husband.

Writer
Susan Montford
IMDb ID (imdb_id)
tt0887971
Script date
December 20, 2006
118Scenes
11Characters
66Pages
8Dialogue samples

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WHILE SHE WAS OUT Save the Cat analysis

Della Myers heads out for last-minute Christmas shopping, only to become the target of a violent gang after a parking-lot confrontation.

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Key characters

Della Myers

Della Myers is listed as Protagonist. Diminutive blonde in her thirties with fine features and a fading Southern accent. In the parsed data, Della Myers is connected to 108 scenes, 88 dialogue lines, 89 text mentions, first appearing around scene 3.

108 scenes / 88 dialogue lines

Chuckie

Chuckie is listed as Antagonist. Twenty-one-year-old leader of the group, looks like a marine gone AWOL. In the parsed data, Chuckie is connected to 19 scenes, 28 dialogue lines, 31 text mentions, first appearing around scene 45.

19 scenes / 28 dialogue lines

Huey

Huey is listed as Antagonist. Small, skinny African-American teenager, sweet-faced. In the parsed data, Huey is connected to 14 scenes, 15 dialogue lines, 15 text mentions, first appearing around scene 45.

14 scenes / 15 dialogue lines

Tomas

Tomas is listed as Antagonist. Twenty-year-old Latino runaway in an American Idol T-shirt. In the parsed data, Tomas is connected to 12 scenes, 10 dialogue lines, 11 text mentions, first appearing around scene 45.

12 scenes / 10 dialogue lines

Vinh

Vinh is listed as Antagonist. Nineteen-year-old Asian punk. In the parsed data, Vinh is connected to 9 scenes, 3 dialogue lines, 3 text mentions, first appearing around scene 45.

9 scenes / 3 dialogue lines

Kenneth

Kenneth is listed as Della's Husband. Forty-something ex-jock with a ruddy face from drinking too much. In the parsed data, Kenneth is connected to 4 scenes, 12 dialogue lines, 17 text mentions, first appearing around scene 3.

4 scenes / 12 dialogue lines

Mary Messina

Mary Messina is listed as Acquaintance. A woman who calls Della on her cell phone. In the parsed data, Mary Messina is connected to 1 scene, 12 dialogue lines, 13 text mentions, first appearing around scene 18.

1 scenes / 12 dialogue lines

Lynn Monroe

Lynn Monroe is listed as Acquaintance. Pretty, well-groomed redhead from Della's college days. In the parsed data, Lynn Monroe is connected to 1 scene, 6 dialogue lines, 7 text mentions, first appearing around scene 40.

1 scenes / 6 dialogue lines

Tammi

Tammi is listed as Della's Daughter. Seven-year-old twin, delicate blue-eyed blonde. In the parsed data, Tammi is connected to 1 scene, 4 dialogue lines, 7 text mentions, first appearing around scene 5.

1 scenes / 4 dialogue lines

Terri

Terri is listed as Della's Daughter. Seven-year-old twin, delicate blue-eyed blonde. In the parsed data, Terri is connected to 1 scene, 2 dialogue lines, 3 text mentions, first appearing around scene 5.

1 scenes / 2 dialogue lines

Cassie

Cassie is listed as Friend. A friend Della plans to meet at the mall. In the parsed data, Cassie is connected to 1 scene, 2 text mentions, first appearing around scene 21.

1 scenes / 0 dialogue lines

Scene outline

  1. 1. EXT. PLEASANT VALLEY BOULEVARD - EVENING

    Introduction to the Pleasant Valley housing development, showcasing identical homes decorated for Christmas.

  2. 2. EXT. DELLA'S HOUSE - EVENING

    An owl hunts a mouse on the lawn of Della's house, and a silhouette is seen in a window.

    Kenneth
  3. 3. INT. DELLA'S HOUSE/ KENNETH'S MEDIA ROOM - EVENING

    Kenneth and Della argue about a broken doll and Della's plans to go out.

    Della Myers, Kenneth
  4. 4. INT. STAIRS - EVENING

    Della climbs the stairs past family photographs.

    Della Myers
  5. 5. INT. THE TWINS BEDROOM - EVENING

    Della says goodbye to her daughters before leaving for the mall.

    Della Myers, Terri, Tammi
  6. 6. INT. STAIRWAY - EVENING

    Della hurries down the stairs.

    Della Myers
  7. 7. INT. HALLWAY - EVENING

    Della puts on her boots.

    Della Myers
  8. 8. INT. KITCHEN - EVENING

    Della grabs cookies.

    Della Myers
  9. 9. INT. STAIRWAY - EVENING

    Della leaves the house.

    Della Myers
  10. 10. EXT. DELLA'S HOUSE - EVENING

    Della gets into her car.

    Della Myers
  11. 11. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della starts her car and prepares to leave.

    Della Myers
  12. 12. EXT. PLEASANT VALLEY BOULEVARD - EVENING

    Della drives down the boulevard.

    Della Myers
  13. 13. EXT. PLEASANT VALLEY CRESCENT - EVENING

    Della drives through the crescent.

    Della Myers
  14. 14. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della passes through the security gates.

    Della Myers
  15. 15. EXT. PLEASANT VALLEY DRIVE - EVENING

    Della drives on Pleasant Valley Drive.

    Della Myers
  16. 16. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della smokes a cigarette and finds a note from Kenneth.

    Della Myers
  17. 17. EXT. PLEASANT VALLEY DRIVE - EVENING

    Della drives past other cars.

    Della Myers
  18. 18. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della receives a phone call from Mary Messina.

    Della Myers, Mary Messina
  19. 19. EXT. PLEASANT VALLEY DRIVE - EVENING

    Christmas lights are visible.

  20. 20. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della calls the Learning Academy.

    Della Myers
  21. 21. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della talks to Cassie on the phone while driving.

    Della Myers, Cassie
  22. 22. EXT. MALL PARKING LOT ENTRANCE - EVENING

    Della arrives at the crowded mall parking lot.

    Della Myers
  23. 23. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della considers leaving.

    Della Myers
  24. 24. EXT. MALL PARKING LOT - EVENING

    Della searches for a parking spot.

    Della Myers
  25. 25. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della waits for a spot.

    Della Myers
  26. 26. EXT. MALL PARKING LOT - EVENING

    Another car takes the spot.

  27. 27. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della realizes she won't find a close spot.

    Della Myers
  28. 28. EXT. MALL PARKING LOT - EVENING

    Confrontation in the parking lot.

  29. 29. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della talks to a rent-a-cop.

    Della Myers
  30. 30. EXT. MALL PARKING LOT - EVENING

    Della follows the rent-a-cop's advice.

    Della Myers
  31. 31. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della is blocked by a poorly parked car.

    Della Myers
  32. 32. EXT. MALL PARKING LOT - EVENING

    Della finds the last spots.

    Della Myers
  33. 33. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della parks.

    Della Myers
  34. 34. EXT. MALL PARKING LOT - EVENING

    Della leaves a note on the gold Plymouth.

    Della Myers
  35. 35. EXT. MALL ENTRANCE - EVENING

    Della enters the mall.

    Della Myers
  36. 36. INT. MALL - EVENING

    Della walks through the mall.

    Della Myers
  37. 37. INT. VICTORIA'S SECRET - EVENING

    Della browses lingerie and interacts with a sales assistant before leaving.

    Della Myers
  38. 38. INT. MALL - EVENING

    Della searches for Cassie at the fountain and heads toward a coffee shop.

    Della Myers
  39. 39. INT. COFFEE SHOP - EVENING

    Della orders coffee and reflects on her appearance.

    Della Myers
  40. 40. INT. MALL - EVENING

    Della runs into an old college acquaintance, Lynn Monroe.

    Della Myers, Lynn Monroe
  41. 41. INT. PHARMACY - EVENING

    Della buys wrapping paper and hygiene products.

    Della Myers
  42. 42. INT. MALL - EVENING

    Della finds the bathroom out of order and heads to the exit.

    Della Myers
  43. 43. EXT. MALL ENTRANCE - EVENING

    Della walks to her car in the parking lot.

    Della Myers
  44. 44. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della is blocked in by another car.

    Della Myers
  45. 45. EXT. MALL PARKING LOT - EVENING

    Della is confronted by Chuckie and his group, who kill a security guard.

    Della Myers, Chuckie, Huey, Vinh, Tomas
  46. 46. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della escapes by driving over a barrier.

    Della Myers
  47. 47. EXT. MALL PARKING LOT - EVENING

    The group gets into their car to pursue Della.

    Chuckie, Huey, Vinh, Tomas
  48. 48. EXT. SERVICE ROAD - EVENING

    Della speeds down the service road.

    Della Myers
  49. 49. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della realizes she is being pursued and shot at.

    Della Myers
  50. 50. EXT. SERVICE ROAD - EVENING

    The Plymouth pursues Della.

    Chuckie, Huey, Vinh, Tomas
  51. 51. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della's mirror is shattered by gunfire.

    Della Myers
  52. 52. EXT. SERVICE ROAD - EVENING

    The pursuit continues toward a stop sign.

    Della Myers
  53. 53. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della decides which way to turn.

    Della Myers
  54. 54. EXT. SERVICE ROAD - EVENING

    Della finds the left turn blocked.

    Della Myers
  55. 55. EXT. EMPTY HOUSING ESTATE ROAD - EVENING

    Della turns right.

    Della Myers
  56. 56. EXT. EMPTY HOUSING ESTATE - EVENING

    Della drives through an unfinished housing complex.

    Della Myers
  57. 57. EXT. SEVEN ELEVEN MINI MALL - EVENING

    Della passes an unfinished mini-mall.

    Della Myers
  58. 58. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della speeds up.

    Della Myers
  59. 59. EXT. EMPTY HOUSING ESTATE - EVENING

    Della continues through the estate.

    Della Myers
  60. 60. EXT. FILLING STATION - EVENING

    Della spots a filling station.

    Della Myers
  61. 61. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della pulls into the filling station.

    Della Myers
  62. 62. EXT. FILLING STATION - EVENING

    The station is closed.

    Della Myers
  63. 63. EXT. EMPTY HOUSING ESTATE - EVENING

    Della continues driving as the pursuers close in.

    Della Myers
  64. 64. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della struggles with visibility.

    Della Myers
  65. 65. EXT. ROUGH ROAD - EVENING

    The road deteriorates.

    Della Myers
  66. 66. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della steers blindly.

    Della Myers
  67. 67. EXT. ROUGH ROAD - EVENING

    A barrier appears.

    Della Myers
  68. 68. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della crashes into the barrier.

    Della Myers
  69. 69. EXT. EDGE OF WOODS - EVENING

    The car veers toward trees.

    Della Myers
  70. 70. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della tries to control the spinning car.

    Della Myers
  71. 71. EXT. EDGE OF WOODS - EVENING

    The car crashes into a pine tree.

    Della Myers
  72. 72. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della attempts to restart the car.

    Della Myers
  73. 73. EXT. EDGE OF WOODS - EVENING

    Della exits the car and assesses her situation.

    Della Myers
  74. 74. INT. FORD EXPLORER - EVENING

    Della tries to restart the car again.

    Della Myers
  75. 75. EXT. EDGE OF WOODS - EVENING

    Della searches the trunk for tools.

    Della Myers
  76. 76. EXT. ROUGH ROAD - EVENING

    Della sees the pursuers' car stuck in the mud.

    Della Myers
  77. 77. EXT. EDGE OF WOODS - EVENING

    Della tries to open the hood as the pursuers approach.

    Della Myers, Chuckie, Tomas
  78. 78. EXT. ROUGH ROAD - EVENING

    Chuckie and his group search for Della using a powerful flashlight while discussing their plans and Huey's doubts.

    Chuckie, Huey, Vinh, Tomas
  79. 79. EXT. EDGE OF WOODS - EVENING

    Della hides as the boys approach her car and discover her footprints.

    Della Myers, Chuckie, Huey, Vinh, Tomas
  80. 80. EXT. UNFINISHED HOUSE 1 - EVENING

    Della takes a brief moment to breathe while hiding against a wall.

    Della Myers

Dialogue examples

First you put yo hands on my ride! Now, I don't know how you was raised but, in my world, laying your hands on someone else's shit is crossing their line! Then, you go slipping an incendiary note up under my windscreen wipers. Well, that'd be an invitation to war to me and my ghetto soldiers.

Chuckie / Scene 45

Why that's fantastic. Listen Della, it's been great talking to you but I have to go get my hair done! David and I are going out tomorrow night for a romantic dinner. I just bought this gorgeous teddy from Victoria's Secret.

Lynn Monroe / Scene 40

TOOL SCHOOL?, Ouch, Mary. Do It Yourself Mechanics is without a doubt the most interesting thing in my life right now. I carry my beloved toolbox in the trunk at all times.

Della Myers / Scene 18

I'm just joking, Della. You know me. I pre-paid ten classes and only made it to two. If you are going I could use a ride. I'd hate to miss another class.

Mary Messina / Scene 18

What do you do all day, Della honey? Cause it sure isn't keeping house. This place is an eyesore. I'm mortgaged up to the eyeballs for this?

Kenneth / Scene 3

I knew it was you, Della. I haven't seen you since college. You left to marry some handsome jock and we never heard from you again.

Lynn Monroe / Scene 40

Huh? One of those rubber balls, I think. I'm headed over there now. Ran out of Christmas wrapping paper. Would you believe it?

Della Myers / Scene 21

These Rent-a-Pig companies are too lame to give their foot soldiers any ammo. Liability laws and all that. Tough shit!

Chuckie / Scene 45

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