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Introduces Capone in the office, establishing the criminal world’s polished surface.
Well, you know, I'll tell ya: it's touching. Like a lot of things in life. We laugh because...
THE UNTOUCHABLES script analysis
Elliot Ness is appointed to take down Al Capone’s empire, assembles an untouchable team, experiences initial failures, then scores early successes, only to suffer a devastating loss. He overcomes doubt, returns to pursue justice through legal means, culminating in Capone’s conviction and Ness’s departure from the force.
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Scene 1 / Page 1 / 1% target
Introduces Capone in the office, establishing the criminal world’s polished surface.
Well, you know, I'll tell ya: it's touching. Like a lot of things in life. We laugh because...
Scene 11 / Page 1 / 5% target
Ness tells the Flying Squad that past behavior is irrelevant, hinting at integrity vs. corruption.
I know that many of you take a drink. What you've done before today is not my concern....
Scenes 5-6 / Pages 1-2 / 10% target
The speakeasy’s explosion and Nitti’s escape establish stakes and violence in Capone’s world.
Scene 10 / Page 2 / 12% target
Ness holds a press conference announcing his mission against Capone, launching the story’s main conflict.
At the request of the City of Chicago, the Federal Government, specifically the Department of the Treasury, has...
Scenes 15-16 / Pages 2-3 / 20% target
The failed warehouse raid and Ness’s subsequent frustration introduce self-doubt.
Scene 18 / Page 3 / 25% target
Meeting Malone on the bridge shifts Ness from lone actor to team builder.
You want to throw your garbage, throw it in the goddamn trashbasket.
Scene 22 / Page 3 / 30% target
Ness recruits accountant Oscar Wallace, establishing the personal/team subplot.
Scene 29 / Page 4 / 40% target
The successful postal-facility raid showcases the Untouchables in action.
Federal Officers. This is a raid.
Scene 30 / Page 4 / 50% target
The celebration dinner marks a false victory and high point for the team.
Scene 31 / Pages 4-5 / 65% target
Capone’s brutal murder of his subordinate shows his ruthless escalation.
Scene 37 / Page 5 / 75% target
Wallace and George’s ambush kills a teammate, shattering Ness’s progress.
Scene 38 / Page 5 / 80% target
Ness and Malone inspect the body, confronting the personal cost of their mission.
No one saw anything?
Scene 41 / Page 6 / 85% target
Courtroom testimony about the ledger refocuses the fight into legal strategy.
In a, uh, over a 3 year period I personally disbursed monies to Mr. Capone in excess of...
Scenes 44-46 / Pages 6-7 / 95% target
The rooftop chase kills Nitti and the jury-list reveal secures Capone’s downfall.
They're going to burn you, Buddy, and I'm going to come and see you burn, you sonofabitch. You...
Scene 48 / Page 7 / 99% target
Ness leaving the Readyroom with a drink signals his journey’s end and personal cost.
I think I'll have a drink.