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THE UNTOUCHABLES script analysis

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Elliot Ness is appointed to take down Al Capone’s empire, assembles an untouchable team, experiences initial failures, then scores early successes, only to suffer a devastating loss. He overcomes doubt, returns to pursue justice through legal means, culminating in Capone’s conviction and Ness’s departure from the force.

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Opening Image

Scene 1 / Page 1 / 1% target

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Introduces Capone in the office, establishing the criminal world’s polished surface.

Well, you know, I'll tell ya: it's touching. Like a lot of things in life. We laugh because...
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Theme Stated

Scene 11 / Page 1 / 5% target

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Ness tells the Flying Squad that past behavior is irrelevant, hinting at integrity vs. corruption.

I know that many of you take a drink. What you've done before today is not my concern....
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Set-Up

Scenes 5-6 / Pages 1-2 / 10% target

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The speakeasy’s explosion and Nitti’s escape establish stakes and violence in Capone’s world.

4

Catalyst

Scene 10 / Page 2 / 12% target

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Ness holds a press conference announcing his mission against Capone, launching the story’s main conflict.

At the request of the City of Chicago, the Federal Government, specifically the Department of the Treasury, has...
5

Debate

Scenes 15-16 / Pages 2-3 / 20% target

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The failed warehouse raid and Ness’s subsequent frustration introduce self-doubt.

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Break into Two

Scene 18 / Page 3 / 25% target

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Meeting Malone on the bridge shifts Ness from lone actor to team builder.

You want to throw your garbage, throw it in the goddamn trashbasket.
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B Story

Scene 22 / Page 3 / 30% target

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Ness recruits accountant Oscar Wallace, establishing the personal/team subplot.

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Fun and Games

Scene 29 / Page 4 / 40% target

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The successful postal-facility raid showcases the Untouchables in action.

Federal Officers. This is a raid.
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Midpoint

Scene 30 / Page 4 / 50% target

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The celebration dinner marks a false victory and high point for the team.

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Bad Guys Close In

Scene 31 / Pages 4-5 / 65% target

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Capone’s brutal murder of his subordinate shows his ruthless escalation.

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All Is Lost

Scene 37 / Page 5 / 75% target

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Wallace and George’s ambush kills a teammate, shattering Ness’s progress.

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Dark Night of the Soul

Scene 38 / Page 5 / 80% target

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Ness and Malone inspect the body, confronting the personal cost of their mission.

No one saw anything?
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Break into Three

Scene 41 / Page 6 / 85% target

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Courtroom testimony about the ledger refocuses the fight into legal strategy.

In a, uh, over a 3 year period I personally disbursed monies to Mr. Capone in excess of...
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Finale

Scenes 44-46 / Pages 6-7 / 95% target

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The rooftop chase kills Nitti and the jury-list reveal secures Capone’s downfall.

They're going to burn you, Buddy, and I'm going to come and see you burn, you sonofabitch. You...
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Final Image

Scene 48 / Page 7 / 99% target

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Ness leaving the Readyroom with a drink signals his journey’s end and personal cost.

I think I'll have a drink.