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THE ELEPHANT MAN poster

1980

THE ELEPHANT MAN script

Doctor Frederick Treves rescues John Merrick, a severely deformed man, from a Victorian freak show and brings him to the London Hospital, where he discovers Merrick's hidden intelligence and gentle nature. Merrick becomes a beloved resident, befriending staff and the actress Mrs. Kendal, but is abducted by his former owner, Bytes, and forced back into the circus. After escaping and returning to the hospital, Merrick attends a theater performance where he receives a standing ovation, fulfilling his dream of acceptance. Later that night, Merrick deliberately lies down to sleep on his back, a position fatal for his condition, and passes away peacefully.

Writer
Christopher De Vore, Eric Bergren & David Lynch
IMDb ID (imdb_id)
tt0080678
Script date
1980
93Scenes
10Characters
103Pages
8Dialogue samples

Save the Cat beat sheet

THE ELEPHANT MAN Save the Cat analysis

London surgeon Frederick Treves discovers John Merrick, the Elephant Man, and brings him into the hospital.

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Key characters

Frederick Treves

Frederick Treves is listed as Surgeon. A compassionate surgeon at the London Hospital who discovers and cares for Merrick. In the parsed data, Frederick Treves is connected to 55 scenes, 165 dialogue lines, 167 text mentions, first appearing around scene 1.

55 scenes / 165 dialogue lines

John Merrick

John Merrick is listed as Protagonist. A man with severe physical deformities who is highly intelligent and sensitive. In the parsed data, John Merrick is connected to 54 scenes, 80 dialogue lines, 95 text mentions, first appearing around scene 24.

54 scenes / 80 dialogue lines

Carr Gomm

Carr Gomm is listed as Hospital Chairman. The administrator of the London Hospital. In the parsed data, Carr Gomm is connected to 16 scenes, 63 dialogue lines, 72 text mentions, first appearing around scene 27.

16 scenes / 63 dialogue lines

Mrs. Mothershead

Mrs. Mothershead is listed as Matron. A stern but ultimately caring hospital matron. In the parsed data, Mrs. Mothershead is connected to 16 scenes, 27 dialogue lines, 33 text mentions, first appearing around scene 19.

16 scenes / 27 dialogue lines

Night Porter

Night Porter is listed as Antagonist. A corrupt hospital employee who abuses Merrick. In the parsed data, Night Porter is connected to 13 scenes, 26 dialogue lines, 26 text mentions, first appearing around scene 7.

13 scenes / 26 dialogue lines

Bytes

Bytes is listed as Antagonist. The cruel owner of the freak show who exploits Merrick. In the parsed data, Bytes is connected to 12 scenes, 34 dialogue lines, 37 text mentions, first appearing around scene 5.

12 scenes / 34 dialogue lines

Anne Treves

Anne Treves is listed as Treves' Wife. Supportive and kind wife of Frederick Treves. In the parsed data, Anne Treves is connected to 12 scenes, 31 dialogue lines, 31 text mentions, first appearing around scene 14.

12 scenes / 31 dialogue lines

Broadneck

Broadneck is listed as Committee Member. A rigid and unsympathetic member of the hospital committee. In the parsed data, Broadneck is connected to 6 scenes, 9 dialogue lines, 13 text mentions, first appearing around scene 40.

6 scenes / 9 dialogue lines

Nora Ireland

Nora Ireland is listed as Nurse. A kind nurse at the London Hospital. In the parsed data, Nora Ireland is connected to 6 scenes, 3 dialogue lines, 3 text mentions, first appearing around scene 25.

6 scenes / 3 dialogue lines

Mrs. Kendal

Mrs. Kendal is listed as Actress. A famous actress who befriends Merrick. In the parsed data, Mrs. Kendal is connected to 4 scenes, 8 dialogue lines, 14 text mentions, first appearing around scene 51.

4 scenes / 8 dialogue lines

Scene outline

  1. 1. EXT. Circus - DAY

    Treves visits a freak show and observes various exhibits, eventually encountering the Elephant Man's display.

    Frederick Treves, Anne Treves, Bytes
  2. 2. INT. Operating Room - London Hospital - DAY

    Treves performs surgery on a machine accident victim while teaching students.

    Frederick Treves
  3. 3. INT. Treves' Operating Room - DAY

    A messenger boy informs Treves that he has located the Elephant Man.

    Frederick Treves
  4. 4. EXT. Outside the Shop - DAY

    Treves meets with the Owner to arrange a private viewing of the Elephant Man.

    Frederick Treves, Bytes
  5. 5. INT. Inside the Shop - DAY

    Treves sees the Elephant Man for the first time.

    John Merrick, Frederick Treves, Bytes
  6. 6. INT. Treves' Office - DAY

    Treves attempts to communicate with Merrick.

    John Merrick, Frederick Treves
  7. 7. INT. Treves' Office - DAY

    Treves attempts to communicate with the hooded figure, but is interrupted by Fox.

    Frederick Treves, John Merrick, Night Porter
  8. 8. INT. Hallway - DAY

    Treves and Fox discuss the mysterious figure.

    Frederick Treves, Night Porter
  9. 9. INT. Treves' Office - DAY

    Treves returns to find the figure hiding and attempts to examine him.

    Frederick Treves, John Merrick
  10. 10. INT. Small Room - London Hospital - DAY

    Treves has the figure photographed.

    Frederick Treves, John Merrick
  11. 11. INT. Lecture Hall - Pathological Society of London - DAY

    Treves presents John Merrick to the medical society.

    Frederick Treves, John Merrick
  12. 12. INT. Treves' Office - DAY

    Treves measures Merrick and prepares for his departure.

    Frederick Treves, John Merrick
  13. 13. INT. Upstairs Hallway - London Hospital - DAY

    Treves and Fox watch Merrick leave.

    Frederick Treves, Night Porter, John Merrick
  14. 14. INT. Entry Hall - Treves' Home - NIGHT

    Treves returns home to his wife.

    Frederick Treves, Anne Treves
  15. 15. INT. Whitechapel - NIGHT

    Bytes abuses Merrick.

    Bytes, John Merrick
  16. 16. INT. Receiving Room - London Hospital - DAY

    The Boy informs Treves that Merrick is sick.

    Frederick Treves
  17. 17. INT. Inside the Shop - DAY

    Treves finds Merrick injured and decides to take him to the hospital.

    Frederick Treves, Bytes, John Merrick
  18. 18. INT. Isolation Ward - DAY

    Treves settles Merrick into the hospital.

    Frederick Treves, John Merrick, Nora Ireland, Mrs. Mothershead, Carr Gomm
  19. 19. INT. Isolation Ward - DAY

    Treves introduces Merrick to Mothershead, who begins caring for him.

    John Merrick, Frederick Treves, Mrs. Mothershead
  20. 20. INT. Isolation Ward Landing - DAY

    A porter delivers water to Merrick's room; Mothershead takes it inside.

    Mrs. Mothershead
  21. 21. INT. Isolation Ward - DAY

    Mothershead bathes Merrick while Treves observes and questions Merrick's past.

    John Merrick, Frederick Treves, Mrs. Mothershead
  22. 22. EXT. Alley / Back Entrance - DAY

    The Night Porter bullies the young porter about Merrick.

    Night Porter
  23. 23. INT. Attic Ward - NIGHT

    Merrick sleeps; the Night Porter wanders the hospital.

    John Merrick, Night Porter
  24. 24. INT. Isolation Ward - MORNING

    Treves attempts to teach Merrick to speak.

    John Merrick, Frederick Treves, Mrs. Mothershead
  25. 25. INT. Isolation Ward - DAY

    Treves shows Mothershead that Merrick can speak.

    John Merrick, Frederick Treves, Mrs. Mothershead
  26. 26. INT. Receiving Room - DAY

    Bytes infiltrates the hospital.

    Bytes
  27. 27. INT. Carr Gomm's Office - DAY

    Treves asks Carr Gomm to let the committee meet Merrick.

    Frederick Treves, Carr Gomm
  28. 28. INT. Staircase - DAY

    Bytes confronts Treves; Carr Gomm intervenes.

    Frederick Treves, Bytes, Carr Gomm
  29. 29. INT. Treves' House - Bedroom - NIGHT

    Treves discusses his progress with Anne.

    Frederick Treves, Anne Treves
  30. 30. INT. Bedroom - NIGHT

    Treves and his wife Anne discuss his moral dilemma regarding John Merrick's intelligence.

    Frederick Treves, Anne Treves
  31. 31. INT. Isolation Ward - NIGHT

    The Night Porter terrifies Merrick by bringing a woman into the ward.

    John Merrick, Night Porter
  32. 32. INT. Bedroom - MORNING

    Treves leaves for work early in the morning.

    Frederick Treves, Anne Treves
  33. 33. INT. Isolation Ward - MORNING

    Treves prepares Merrick for the meeting with Carr Gomm.

    John Merrick, Frederick Treves
  34. 34. INT. Hallway - DAY

    Treves and Carr Gomm discuss Merrick's condition and the hospital's obligations.

    Frederick Treves, Carr Gomm
  35. 35. INT. Isolation Ward - DAY

    Merrick meets Carr Gomm and surprises him with his intelligence.

    John Merrick, Frederick Treves, Carr Gomm
  36. 36. INT. Isolation Ward - DAY

    Treves and Merrick discuss the interview.

    John Merrick, Frederick Treves
  37. 37. INT. Carr Gomm's Office - DAY

    Carr Gomm agrees to present Merrick's case to the committee.

    Frederick Treves, Carr Gomm
  38. 38. INT. Isolation Ward - DAY

    Mothershead visits Merrick and acknowledges his intelligence.

    John Merrick, Mrs. Mothershead
  39. 39. INT. Isolation Ward - NIGHT

    The Night Porter threatens Merrick.

    John Merrick, Night Porter
  40. 40. INT. Committee Room - DAY

    The committee votes against keeping Merrick at the hospital.

    Frederick Treves, Carr Gomm, Broadneck
  41. 41. INT. DINING HALL - THE LONDON - NIGHT

    Treves and other doctors dine; Treves leaves after being mocked by his colleagues regarding Merrick.

    Frederick Treves, Broadneck, Carr Gomm
  42. 42. INT. BEDSTEAD SQUARE ROOMS - NIGHT

    Two charwomen clean a dusty room and discuss Merrick.

  43. 43. INT. ISOLATION WARD - NIGHT

    Treves visits Merrick and gives him a book; Merrick is disturbed by the news of moving.

    John Merrick, Frederick Treves
  44. 44. INT. THE PEACOCK PUB - WHITECHAPEL - NIGHT

    The Night Porter reads a letter about Merrick to the pub crowd, planning to exploit him.

    Night Porter
  45. 45. INT. HALLWAY - MOVING DAY - DAY

    Treves escorts Merrick to his new room.

    John Merrick, Frederick Treves
  46. 46. INT. BEDSTEAD SQUARE ROOM - DAY

    Merrick arrives at his new room and is relieved to find it is a hospital, not a workhouse.

    John Merrick, Frederick Treves
  47. 47. INT. HALLWAY - DAY

    Treves asks Carr Gomm about the public response to Merrick.

    Frederick Treves, Carr Gomm
  48. 48. INT. MERRICK'S ROOM - DAY

    Nurses prepare to care for Merrick; Mothershead gives instructions.

    John Merrick, Mrs. Mothershead, Nora Ireland
  49. 49. INT. ENTRY HALL AND SITTING ROOM - TREVES' HOME - DAY

    Merrick visits Treves' home and meets Anne Treves.

    John Merrick, Frederick Treves, Anne Treves
  50. 50. INT. MERRICK'S ROOM - MORNING

    Merrick builds a model of St. Phillips; Nora visits and admires his work.

    John Merrick, Nora Ireland
  51. 51. INT. MERRICK'S ROOM - DAY

    Treves introduces Mrs. Kendal to Merrick.

    John Merrick, Frederick Treves, Mrs. Kendal
  52. 52. INT. Merrick's Room - DAY

    Mrs. Kendal explains the magic of the theater to Merrick and they recite Romeo and Juliet together.

    John Merrick, Mrs. Kendal, Frederick Treves
  53. 53. EXT. The Peacock - Whitechapel - NIGHT

    Bytes and the Night Porter conspire to exploit Merrick.

    Bytes, Night Porter
  54. 54. INT. Sitting Room - DAY

    Society women gossip about Mrs. Kendal's visit to Merrick.

  55. 55. EXT. London Hospital Gate - DAY

    A society woman decides not to visit Merrick because of her attire.

  56. 56. INT. Merrick's Room - DAY

    Merrick hosts society visitors.

    John Merrick
  57. 57. INT. The Receiving Room - DAY

    Treves and Mothershead argue about the visitors.

    Frederick Treves, Mrs. Mothershead
  58. 58. INT. Merrick's Room - DAY

    Merrick asks Treves if he can be cured.

    John Merrick, Frederick Treves, Nora Ireland
  59. 59. INT. Hallway - DAY

    Treves discusses the dressing bag with Mothershead.

    Frederick Treves, Mrs. Mothershead
  60. 60. INT. Merrick's Room - DUSK

    The Night Porter taunts Merrick.

    John Merrick, Night Porter
  61. 61. INT. Sitting Room - Treves' Home - NIGHT

    Treves questions his own morality.

    Frederick Treves, Anne Treves
  62. 62. INT. Basement - The London - NIGHT

    Treves burns his surgeon's coat.

    Frederick Treves
  63. 63. INT. Hallway - The London Hospital - DAY

    Carr Gomm and Broadneck discuss the committee's response.

    Carr Gomm, Broadneck
  64. 64. INT. Carr's Office - DAY

    Carr Gomm receives a letter from the Royal family.

    Carr Gomm, Mrs. Mothershead
  65. 65. INT. Committee Room - The London - DAY

    The committee meets to decide Merrick's fate.

    Carr Gomm, Frederick Treves, Broadneck
  66. 66. INT. Merrick's Room - DAY

    Merrick works on his cathedral model.

    John Merrick
  67. 67. EXT. Whitechapel Road - DAY

    Princess Alexandra arrives at the hospital.

  68. 68. INT. Committee Room - The London - DAY

    Princess Alexandra intervenes on Merrick's behalf.

    Carr Gomm, Frederick Treves, Broadneck
  69. 69. INT. Committee Room - DAY

    The hospital committee votes to admit John Merrick permanently.

    Frederick Treves, Carr Gomm, Broadneck
  70. 70. INT. Merrick's Room - DAY

    Treves, Carr Gomm, and Mothershead inform Merrick he has a permanent home.

    John Merrick, Frederick Treves, Carr Gomm, Mrs. Mothershead
  71. 71. INT. Merrick's Room - NIGHT

    Merrick admires his new gifts and prepares to 'transform' himself.

    John Merrick
  72. 72. INT. The Peacock Pub - NIGHT

    The Night Porter recruits customers to see Merrick.

    Bytes, Night Porter
  73. 73. INT. Merrick's Room - NIGHT

    The Night Porter brings a crowd to abuse and mock Merrick.

    John Merrick, Bytes, Night Porter
  74. 74. INT. Merrick's Room - MORNING

    Treves discovers Merrick is missing.

    Frederick Treves, Mrs. Mothershead
  75. 75. INT. Operating Theatre - DAY

    Treves confronts the Night Porter.

    Frederick Treves, Mrs. Mothershead, Night Porter
  76. 76. EXT. Circus Wagon - NIGHT

    Merrick is forced to perform the elephant call for a hostile crowd, fails, and collapses. Bytes abuses him.

    John Merrick, Bytes
  77. 77. EXT. Small Circle of Wagons - NIGHT

    Bytes, drunk and angry, throws Merrick into a monkey cage.

    John Merrick, Bytes
  78. 78. EXT. Monkey Cage - NIGHT

    The circus freaks rescue Merrick from the cage.

    John Merrick
  79. 79. EXT. Woods - NIGHT

    The freaks lead Merrick through the woods.

    John Merrick
  80. 80. EXT. Dirt Road / Train Station - NIGHT

    Merrick boards a train to London with the help of the freaks.

    John Merrick

Dialogue examples

"Mrs. Kendal, always at the forefront of fashion and form, was seen leaving The London the other afternoon. No, dear readers, the most facile actress of our day has not been taken ill, but rather said she was 'visiting a friend'. And who was the lucky recipient of this attention? Quick enquiries proved it to be none other than Mr. John Merrick, The Elephant Man, with whom our readers are undoubtedly familiar. After a chat of three-quarters of an hour, Mrs. Kendal was kind enough to leave Mr. Merrick with an autographed portrait of herself. Owing to a disfigurement of the most extreme nature, Mr. Merrick has never been properly presented to London society. But knowing that wherever Mrs. Kendal goes, others inevitably follow, the questions arises: Will London society present itself to him?"

Anne Treves / Scene 54

He is English, he is twenty-one years of age and his name is John Merrick. Gentlemen, in the course of my profession I have come upon lamentable deformities of the face due to injury or disease, as well as mutilations and contortions of the body, depending upon like causes; but, at no time have I met with such a dreaded or perverted version of a human being as this man. I wish to draw your attention to the insidious conditions affecting this patient. Note, if you will, the extreme enlargement of the skull... and upper limb, which is totally useless. The alarming curvature of the spine... Turn him, please... the looseness of the skin, and the varying fibrous tumors that cover 90% of the body.

Frederick Treves / Scene 11

Gentlemen, may I make a suggestion. There are two small rooms off Bedstead Square that are no longer in use and would be admirably suited to Mr. Merrick's needs. I also propose to write a letter to The Times, appealing to their readers for assistance. Knowing the generosity of the British public, I feel we would have little trouble in raising the funds for his maintenance. Indeed, this hospital's rules do preclude the admission of incurables, but if ever there was an exception to the rule, it is this patient. So therefore, I propose, if Mr. Treves is finished, that we put it to a vote. All those in favor of keeping Mr. Merrick here?

Carr Gomm / Scene 40

It's very difficult to put into a nutshell, but I should say the theater is the shrine of the imagination, where one may suspend disbelief and travel anywhere in the world, to any time you desire. You may look over the shoulders of kings, unobserved, battle with ruthless tyrants, and marry the beautiful princess, all in the space of a few hours. Onstage you may be whoever you wish to be, do anything you please, and always, always live happily ever after. The theatre is all the brightest and best things of the world, Mr. Merrick. It is lights and music, gaiety and joy. It's... well, it's romance.

Mrs. Kendal / Scene 52

Which brings to mind my next point. The rules, gentlemen, the rules. In a society such as ours, it is of paramount importance that we not stray from the established order. Has that order not already been fearfully strained by allowing this... this... sideshow exhibit to take up residence, however temporary, in two very useful rooms, the purpose of which would be far better served in accommodating treatable patients, patients to whom this hospital was originally dedicated? I believe we have a duty...

Broadneck / Scene 65

He's doing very well. In fact that's why I came to see you. I think that if I were to present Mr. Merrick to the hospital committee, then they would have a chance to see for themselves not only the extraordinary nature of the disease, but of the man as well. If the committee had a chance to speak with him, hear him say a few words for himself, I'm sure they would see him as a patient, rather than as a violation of the rules.

Frederick Treves / Scene 27

...In light of these facts, our course is clear. The question is not whether to accept this creature as a patient, the question is when will those rooms be vacated for use by better qualified, more deserving cases? I move that this Elephant Man be removed from the premises immediately. We have a sacred duty to cure the sick, not care for circus animals. That is my last word on the subject. Mr. Chairman, shall we vote?

Broadneck / Scene 68

Gentlemen, John Merrick is not an animal, he is a man, fully aware of his condition. An intelligent, sensitive, literate man, with an intimate knowledge of the Bible. His horrible infirmities do not reduce him to anything less than what he is, a man; and it would be criminal if we of the London Hospital, his final refuge, the last place on earth where this man can find peace, were to cast him out.

Frederick Treves / Scene 40

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