1Opening Image
Scene 1 / Page 1 / 1% target
60% Voice-over and nighttime New York visuals establish Harry’s carefree pursuit of younger women.
Ahhhh... The sweet, uncomplicated satisfaction of The Younger Woman. That fleeting age when everything just falls right into...
2Theme Stated
Scene 2 / Page 1 / 5% target
60% Harry wonders if he’ll ever settle down with an age-appropriate partner, hinting at finding true love over fleeting pleasure.
So what does a life of bucking the system all add up to? To never settle down with...
3Set-Up
Scenes 1-5 / Pages 1-10 / 10% target
50% We see Harry’s lifestyle, his imagination of a normal life, and his trip to the Hamptons with Marin.
4Catalyst
Scene 6 / Pages 10-12 / 12% target
70% Erica and Zoe unexpectedly show up at the beach house, upending Harry’s plans.
Okay, stay right where you are. We have a knife.
5Debate
Scenes 6-12 / Pages 10-20 / 20% target
60% Harry debates continuing his hedonistic ways versus encountering real connection as Erica criticizes his shallowness.
6Break into Two
Scene 19 / Pages 20-22 / 25% target
60% Harry is installed in Erica’s guest room, entering a new world of domesticity and potential romance.
7B Story
Scene 15 / Pages 15-16 / 30% target
60% Dr. Julian Mercer’s flirtation with Erica introduces the secondary romance thread.
You know, I heard you had a place in the Hamptons. I really am a very big fan.
8Fun and Games
Scenes 20-35 / Pages 22-60 / 40% target
50% Harry and Erica clash over habits, share walks and pajama parties, and begin to bond in light, playful scenes.
9Midpoint
Scene 37 / Pages 60-62 / 50% target
60% Marin breaks up with Harry, raising the stakes for his budding feelings with Erica.
I'm breaking up with Harry.
10Bad Guys Close In
Scenes 42-45 / Pages 70-85 / 65% target
60% Julian’s continued pursuit and Harry’s insensitive date in Manhattan threaten the new relationship.
11All Is Lost
Scene 46 / Pages 85-88 / 75% target
60% Erica storms off after their public argument, leaving Harry alone and regretful.
Oh, God, I'm so stupid...
12Dark Night of the Soul
Scene 47 / Pages 88-90 / 80% target
60% Harry is rushed to the hospital again, reflecting on his mistakes and loneliness.
You have been through this before. Give him 5 mgs of Metoprolol. You having chest pain right now?
13Break into Three
Scene 49 / Pages 90-93 / 85% target
60% Harry surprises Erica in Paris, deciding to fight for their relationship.
I've come a long way to see you, Erica.
14Finale
Scenes 49-51 / Pages 90-100 / 95% target
60% Harry’s grand confession at Pont Neuf and Erica’s response resolve the romantic arc.
I'm 63 years old and I am in love for the first time in my life. And that's...
15Final Image
Scene 52 / Pages 100-102 / 99% target
60% One year later, Harry and Erica dine together in New York, showing their happy life.