1Opening Image
Scene 1 / Page 1 / 1% target
10% Alejandro’s solitary moment in the ocean establishing revenge and moral questioning opens the story visually and thematically.
So easy to pretend we are not to blame. That a demon enters us. No... The demon is...
2Theme Stated
Scene 2 / Page 1 / 5% target
10% During the breaching team’s prayer, the cost of duty and moral accountability is hinted at as Kate prepares to enter violence.
Our Father, who art in Heaven, hallowed be Thy Name. Thy Kingdom come... Thy will be done, on...
3Set-Up
Scenes 2-5 / Pages 1-10 / 10% target
10% Introduces Kate, her role on the SWAT team, the brutal hidden crime scene, and her reaction to discovering bodies in the walls.
4Catalyst
Scene 7 / Pages 10-12 / 12% target
10% An explosion kills officers at the backyard investigation, jolting Kate into a larger world of cartel violence.
5Debate
Scenes 9-10 / Pages 12-15 / 20% target
10% Kate decontaminates and hesitates as she’s recruited into the shadow task force, questioning her suitability.
Our objective is to dramatically overreact.
6Break into Two
Scene 10 / Page 15 / 25% target
10% Kate officially accepts the mission when she is briefed at Homeland Security and joins the team.
7B Story
Scenes 11-12 / Pages 15-18 / 30% target
10% Introduction of Silvio and his son Eliseo provides the personal, human counterpoint to Kate’s and Alejandro’s storyline.
8Fun and Games
Scenes 17-26 / Pages 18-35 / 40% target
10% The task force’s field operations in Juarez and border convoys show action and expose Kate to cartel chaos.
He wears the state police shirt. The pig -- Not what you think it means. All state police...
9Midpoint
Scene 26 / Page 35 / 50% target
10% The convoy ambush at the border is a false victory that turns into disaster, raising stakes and danger.
WHAT THE FUCK ARE WE DOING??!!
10Bad Guys Close In
Scenes 28-34 / Pages 36-45 / 65% target
10% Kate faces interrogation tactics, surveillance, and internal resistance as cartel and bureaucracy tighten the noose.
Watch these men close. Look for the ones like the men you saw in Juarez.
11All Is Lost
Scene 47 / Page 45 / 75% target
10% Reggie finds Macy’s photo in Ted’s bag, implying betrayal and failure in Kate’s judgment.
Call 911. Right fucking now, call 911.
12Dark Night of the Soul
Scene 49 / Pages 45-46 / 80% target
10% On the scene roof, Kate and Reggie confront the mission’s personal and ethical costs.
13Break into Three
Scene 54 / Page 50 / 85% target
10% Matt reveals the tunnel location, refocusing Kate’s mission toward a decisive operation.
We may have the tunnel, right here.
14Finale
Scenes 63-70 / Pages 60-70 / 95% target
10% The tunnel raid and Alejandro’s personal vendetta climax with violent confrontations, leading to the cartel’s dismantling.
What you do now is for your family. Whether they see tomorrow rests with you.
15Final Image
Scene 73 / Pages 72-73 / 99% target
10% Eliseo playing soccer with Alejandro’s voiceover closes on a note of personal reflection and the cycle of violence.