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SHOOTER script analysis

SHOOTER script - Save the Cat beat sheet analysis

Ex‐Marine sniper Bob Lee Swagger is coaxed out of retirement to thwart a presidential assassination, only to be set up as the fall guy. FBI agent Nick Memphis pursues the truth, forging an unlikely alliance with Swagger to expose a deep government conspiracy and bring the real killers to justice.

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1

Opening Image

Scene 1 / Page 1 / 1% target

61%

Opens with Swagger and Fenn observing enemy troops in Vietnam, establishing his sniper identity and world.

2

Theme Stated

Scene 4 / Page 1 / 5% target

64%

Swagger declares, “I don’t kill anymore,” stating the theme of violence and redemption.

I don't kill anymore.
3

Set-Up

Scenes 1-4 / Page 1 / 10% target

57%

We see Swagger’s past in Vietnam, his retirement life in Appalachia, and introduction of FBI agent Memphis.

4

Catalyst

Scene 4 / Page 1 / 12% target

68%

Government agents approach Swagger about an assassination plot on the President.

Our Intelligence reports tell us there's going to be an assassination attempt on the President.
5

Debate

Scenes 6-8 / Page 1 / 20% target

52%

Swagger struggles with taking the job, pacing in his hotel room and weighing his vow not to kill.

6

Break into Two

Scene 7 / Page 1 / 25% target

59%

Swagger meets the conspiracy team and commits to the plan, crossing into Act Two.

The shooter will fire on the President from a distance of 1800 yards. Because of that, he'll use...
7

B Story

Scene 3 / Page 1 / 30% target

48%

Introduces Nick Memphis discovering a crime, beginning his parallel investigation and personal arc.

8

Fun and Games

Scenes 7-10 / Page 1 / 40% target

62%

Shows Swagger preparing the sniping position, the thrill of the mission and sudden betrayal at the shooting.

9

Midpoint

Scene 10 / Page 1 / 50% target

71%

The assassination attempt goes awry—glass is bulletproof and Swagger is framed, raising the stakes.

Bullet proof! They changed the glass.
10

Bad Guys Close In

Scenes 11-15 / Page 1 / 65% target

54%

Swagger is wounded and on the run while Memphis is ostracized at the FBI, closing in from both sides.

11

All Is Lost

Scene 26 / Page 1 / 75% target

65%

Memphis is left for dead in a staged ‘suicide,’ marking the darkest moment for the hero.

It's a really great suicide note. You felt so bad letting the Bureau down, you just couldn't face...
12

Dark Night of the Soul

Scenes 28-29 / Page 1 / 80% target

49%

Swagger and Memphis regroup in a motel, doubting if they can clear Swagger’s name.

13

Break into Three

Scene 32 / Page 1 / 85% target

67%

Memphis uncovers the Black Ops conspiracy, providing the information needed to fight back.

I ran a trace on a number Timmons called just before he died. It's a Black Ops outfit...
14

Finale

Scenes 35-37 / Page 1 / 95% target

58%

Swagger and Memphis assault Scott’s ranch and engage mercenaries to expose the real villains.

15

Final Image

Scene 38 / Page 1 / 99% target

60%

After justice is served, Swagger and Memphis part ways, Swagger joking about getting a new dog.

First thing? Got to get me a new dog.