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Shallow Grave script analysis

Shallow Grave script - Save the Cat beat sheet analysis

Three flatmates discover their new roommate dead with a suitcase of cash and must decide whether to report it or seize the money. Their pact leads to disposing of the body, escalating tensions among them, and attracting dangerous criminals. As alliances fray, one must step up to protect the others, leading to a final confrontation. In the aftermath, the moral cost of their choices is laid bare.

85 Save the Cat fit score 67% analysis confidence / 45 parsed scenes

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1

Opening Image

Scene 1 / Page 1 / 1% target

80%

Introduces David, Alex, and Juliet interviewing a prospective flatmate—establishing their normal life.

Hello, I've come about the room.
2

Theme Stated

Scene 3 / Page 2 / 5% target

70%

Squash metaphor hints at domination and moral struggle underpinning the story.

Squash is often used as a metaphor to represent a struggle for personal domination.
3

Set-Up

Scenes 4-5 / Pages 2-3 / 10% target

75%

Flatmates continue search, reject and then accept Hugo, showing their dynamic and ordinary world.

You mean I can have the room?
4

Catalyst

Scene 6 / Page 3 / 12% target

85%

They discover Hugo’s corpse and a bag of money, upending their lives.

Tell them there's a suitcase of money and you don't want it.
5

Debate

Scenes 6-7 / Pages 3-4 / 20% target

80%

They argue over reporting the death vs. keeping the cash and how to handle the corpse.

6

Break into Two

Scene 8 / Page 4 / 25% target

60%

David receives accounting folder but commits to the scheme—crossing into Act II.

What do we do here, David?
7

B Story

Scene 13 / Page 6 / 30% target

65%

Juliet joins David at work, highlighting their personal connection outside the money plot.

8

Fun and Games

Scene 15 / Page 6 / 40% target

75%

They shop for tools to dispose of the body—playing out the illicit thrill of their deal.

All right, now listen. We have to dispose of the body in such a way as to make...
9

Midpoint

Scene 23 / Page 8 / 50% target

80%

They draw lots to move the body; David loses, raising stakes and commitment.

10

Bad Guys Close In

Scene 18 / Page 7 / 65% target

70%

Andy and Tim torture a captive, signaling external criminal threat closing in.

11

All Is Lost

Scene 40 / Page 12 / 75% target

85%

Tim and Andy break in and attack Alex and Juliet—their safe world collapses.

12

Dark Night of the Soul

Scene 38 / Page 11 / 80% target

75%

Alex and Juliet worry about David’s obsessive hoarding—internal crisis peaks.

He can't stay up there.
13

Break into Three

Scene 41 / Pages 12-13 / 85% target

80%

David decides to fight back and kills Tim and Andy, moving into Act III resolution.

14

Finale

Scenes 42-43 / Pages 13-14 / 95% target

85%

David rescues Alex and Juliet; police arrive, resolving both action and moral consequences.

15

Final Image

Scene 45 / Page 15 / 99% target

80%

Police at the burial site; Alex covers the story, mirroring the opening but transformed by cost.