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2004

Perfect Creature script

In 1969, Police Captain Lilly investigates a series of murders committed by Edgar, an aberrant genetically engineered Brother who is experimenting with genetics and infecting humans, while grieving the loss of her child. Lilly, aided by the powerful Brother Silus, hunts Edgar, who escapes after confrontations and later kidnaps and infects officer Steph, intensifying Lilly's resolve as Silus uncovers the Brotherhood's plan to eradicate the infected. Silus and Lilly's colleague Jones discover Edgar is poisoning the city's water supply, leading Silus to infiltrate the quarantine zone where he finds a newborn baby and confronts Edgar, killing him in a brutal fight. Silus rescues Lilly, who then takes the newborn baby, symbolizing a future of peaceful coexistence, as they escape the quarantine zone, with Silus choosing to protect humanity over the Brotherhood's destructive plans.

Writer
Glenn Standring
IMDb ID (imdb_id)
tt0403407
Script date
14 May 2004
111Scenes
10Characters
71Pages
8Dialogue samples

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Perfect Creature Save the Cat analysis

In a plague‐ridden world, genetically enhanced Brothers protect humanity until one turns rogue, killing and infecting citizens.

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Key characters

Silus

Silus is listed as Brother. A handsome, powerful Brother with piercing light gray eyes and fangs. In the parsed data, Silus is connected to 59 scenes, 92 dialogue lines, 108 text mentions, first appearing around scene 13.

59 scenes / 92 dialogue lines

Lilly

Lilly is listed as Police Captain. Intelligent, handsome, 25-year-old police captain who lost her child to influenza. In the parsed data, Lilly is connected to 52 scenes, 93 dialogue lines, 112 text mentions, first appearing around scene 1.

52 scenes / 93 dialogue lines

Edgar

Edgar is listed as Antagonist. An aberrant, infected Brother who kills humans and experiments with genetics. In the parsed data, Edgar is connected to 37 scenes, 62 dialogue lines, 80 text mentions, first appearing around scene 31.

37 scenes / 62 dialogue lines

Jones

Jones is listed as Police Officer. A cynical, callous police officer who works with Lilly. In the parsed data, Jones is connected to 37 scenes, 56 dialogue lines, 64 text mentions, first appearing around scene 13.

37 scenes / 56 dialogue lines

Dominic

Dominic is listed as Police Officer. A young, good-looking police officer on Lilly's team. In the parsed data, Dominic is connected to 13 scenes, 10 dialogue lines, 11 text mentions, first appearing around scene 31.

13 scenes / 10 dialogue lines

Frank

Frank is listed as Police Officer. A police officer on Lilly's team. In the parsed data, Frank is connected to 9 scenes, 7 dialogue lines, 10 text mentions, first appearing around scene 31.

9 scenes / 7 dialogue lines

Augustus

Augustus is listed as Brother Leader. An ancient-looking, perfectly dressed Brother who leads the Brotherhood. In the parsed data, Augustus is connected to 8 scenes, 19 dialogue lines, 19 text mentions, first appearing around scene 3.

8 scenes / 19 dialogue lines

Steph

Steph is listed as Police Officer. A young female police officer who admires the Brotherhood. In the parsed data, Steph is connected to 8 scenes, 12 dialogue lines, 18 text mentions, first appearing around scene 29.

8 scenes / 12 dialogue lines

Professor Liepsky

Professor Liepsky is listed as Scientist. A human scientist working with the Brotherhood. In the parsed data, Professor Liepsky is connected to 6 scenes, 12 dialogue lines, 13 text mentions, first appearing around scene 2.

6 scenes / 12 dialogue lines

Anderson

Anderson is listed as Police Chief. A harassed, balding police chief in his 50s. In the parsed data, Anderson is connected to 2 scenes, 9 dialogue lines, 10 text mentions, first appearing around scene 28.

2 scenes / 9 dialogue lines

Scene outline

  1. 1. EXT. PROLOGUE ON BLACK - NIGHT

    Lilly provides a historical overview of the plagues and the emergence of the Brothers.

    Lilly
  2. 2. INT. DOCTORS SURGERY - DAY

    A Genetic Doctor explains the origin of the Brothers to an apprentice while examining a pregnant woman.

    Professor Liepsky
  3. 3. INT. HOSPITAL, OPERATION ROOM - DAY

    Augustus and a young Silus witness the birth of a new Brother.

    Silus, Augustus
  4. 4. EXT. CITYSCAPE - NIGHT

    Establishment of the Pacific Colony in 1969.

  5. 5. EXT. STREET - NIGHT

    Silus hunts an aberrant creature in the city streets.

    Silus, Edgar
  6. 6. INT. CAFE - NIGHT

    Silus and Augustus discuss the hunt for Edgar.

    Silus, Augustus
  7. 7. INT. JAMESTOWN SLUM, TENEMENT - DAY

    Lilly and her team raid a slum tenement for black market vaccines.

    Lilly, Jones, Frank
  8. 8. INT. POLICE CAR - TWILIGHT

    Lilly leaves her team, showing signs of personal grief.

    Lilly, Jones, Frank
  9. 9. INT. LILLY'S APARTMENT - NIGHT

    Lilly returns home and mourns her child.

    Lilly
  10. 10. EXT. JAMESTOWN SLUM, STREET - NIGHT

    A street kid witnesses a murder by a Brother.

    Edgar
  11. 11. INT. NATURAL HISTORY MUSEUM - DAY

    Augustus teaches children about the history of the Brotherhood.

    Silus, Augustus
  12. 12. EXT. SLUM, STREET - DAY

    Lilly investigates the murder scene.

    Lilly, Jones, Dominic
  13. 13. EXT. JAMESTOWN SLUM, ALLEYWAY - DAY

    Lilly questions a young boy about a man he saw, who turns out to be a Brother.

    Lilly, Jones, Frank, Dominic
  14. 14. EXT. JAMESTOWN SLUM, BUILDING ABOVE ALLEYWAY - CONTINUOUS

    Silus watches Lilly and Jones from a rooftop.

    Lilly, Silus, Jones
  15. 15. INT. POLICE STATION, HOWARD ANDERSON'S OFFICE - LATER

    Lilly reports to Anderson about the quarantine and the investigation.

    Lilly, Anderson
  16. 16. INT. POLICE STATION, COMMUNAL OFFICE - DAY

    Lilly encounters Jones and Steph, who is excited about Silus's presence.

    Lilly, Jones, Steph
  17. 17. INT. POLICE STATION, LILLY'S OFFICE - CONTINUOUS

    Lilly and Silus discuss the investigation into Brother Edgar.

    Lilly, Silus
  18. 18. INT. POLICE STATION, BRIEFING ROOM - LATER

    Silus and Lilly brief the police team on Brother Edgar.

    Lilly, Silus, Jones, Frank, Dominic
  19. 19. EXT. JAMESTOWN, BRIDGE SQUARE - NIGHT

    Lilly watches the square while Silus observes from above.

    Lilly, Silus
  20. 20. EXT. JAMESTOWN, BRIDGE SQUARE, ROOF - NIGHT

    Silus monitors the operation.

    Silus
  21. 21. INT. POLICE VAN - NIGHT

    Lilly and her team prepare for the encounter.

    Lilly, Jones, Dominic
  22. 22. INT. APARTMENT BUILDING, BRIDGE SQUARE - NIGHT

    Frank and Abernathy search the building.

    Frank
  23. 23. INT. APARTMENT BUILDING, VENTILATION SHAFT - CONTINUOUS

    Edgar moves through the ventilation shaft.

    Edgar
  24. 24. INT. ROOM, SAME BUILDING - NIGHT

    Edgar watches potential victims through the vents.

    Edgar
  25. 25. INT. APARTMENT BUILDING, HALL - NIGHT

    Frank hears a struggle and alerts Lilly.

    Lilly, Frank
  26. 26. INT. POLICE VAN - CONTINUOUS

    Lilly and her team rush to the building.

    Lilly, Jones, Dominic
  27. 27. EXT. JAMESTOWN, BRIDGE SQUARE, ROOF - NIGHT

    Silus watches the police enter the building.

    Silus
  28. 28. INT. APARTMENT BUILDING, STAIR WELL - NIGHT

    Lilly and her team rush up the stairs.

    Lilly, Jones, Dominic
  29. 29. INT. APARTMENT BUILDING, BRIDGE SQUARE, HALL - NIGHT

    Lilly and her team find the crime scene.

    Lilly, Edgar, Jones, Dominic
  30. 30. INT. APARTMENT BUILDING, BRIDGE SQUARE, ROOM - NIGHT

    Edgar attacks Lilly.

    Lilly, Edgar
  31. 31. INT. APARTMENT BUILDING, BRIDGE SQUARE, HALL - NIGHT

    Jones discovers Lilly is missing.

    Jones
  32. 32. INT. APARTMENT BUILDING, BRIDGE SQUARE, ROOM - NIGHT

    Silus saves Lilly after Edgar flees.

    Lilly, Silus, Jones, Dominic
  33. 33. INT. APARTMENT BUILDING, VENTILATION SHAFT - NIGHT

    Silus pursues Edgar through the shaft.

    Silus, Edgar
  34. 34. INT. APARTMENT BUILDING, HALL - CONTINUOUS

    Jones searches for Edgar.

    Jones
  35. 35. INT. APARTMENT BUILDING, DIFFERENT FLOOR - NIGHT

    Edgar crashes into the hall.

    Silus, Edgar
  36. 36. INT. APARTMENT BUILDING, CEILING CAVITY - NIGHT

    Silus and Edgar fight in the ceiling cavity.

    Silus, Edgar
  37. 37. INT. APARTMENT BUILDING, ANOTHER HALL - NIGHT

    Silus defeats Edgar.

    Silus, Edgar, Jones
  38. 38. INT. HOSPITAL, LILLY'S WARD - DAY

    Lilly recovers and talks with Silus.

    Lilly, Silus
  39. 39. INT. HOSPITAL, LILLY'S WARD - CONTINUOUS

    Silus and Lilly discuss their pasts and the nature of their existence before Silus departs.

    Lilly, Silus
  40. 40. INT. HOSPITAL, LILLY'S WARD - CONTINUOUS

    Jones intercepts Silus as he leaves, giving him a newspaper about the Jamestown deaths.

    Silus, Jones
  41. 41. EXT. BROTHERHOOD BUILDING, FOYER - DAY

    Establishing shot of the Brotherhood building.

  42. 42. INT. BROTHERHOOD BUILDING, FOYER - DAY

    Silus enters the building and takes the elevator.

    Silus
  43. 43. INT. BROTHERHOOD BUILDING, SECURITY CONTROL ROOM - DAY

    Silus meets Augustus and Professor Liepsky to discuss the imprisoned Edgar.

    Silus, Augustus, Professor Liepsky
  44. 44. INT. BROTHERHOOD BUILDING, LABS - CONTINUOUS

    Silus approaches the biological containment area.

    Silus
  45. 45. INT. BROTHERHOOD BUILDING, BIO CONTAINMENT WARD - DAY

    Silus observes infected women and learns about the genetic experiments.

    Silus, Augustus, Professor Liepsky
  46. 46. INT. BROTHERHOOD BUILDING, CELL ANTEROOM - CONTINUOUS

    Silus asks about Lilly's safety.

    Silus, Professor Liepsky
  47. 47. INT. BROTHERHOOD BUILDING, CELL - CONTINUOUS

    Silus confronts Edgar in his cell.

    Silus, Edgar
  48. 48. INT. BROTHERHOOD BUILDING, CELL - NIGHT

    Edgar exercises and eventually smashes his head against the glass.

    Edgar
  49. 49. INT. BROTHERHOOD BUILDING, SECURITY CONTROL ROOM - CONTINUOUS

    Operators react to Edgar's violence.

  50. 50. EXT. JAMESTOWN CLUBLAND, STREET - NIGHT

    Lilly and her team conduct a raid.

    Lilly, Jones, Dominic
  51. 51. EXT. JAMESTOWN CLUBLAND, STREET - CONTINUOUS

    Lilly leaves the building and kisses a Brotherhood amulet.

    Lilly
  52. 52. EXT. JAMESTOWN CLUBLAND, BUILDING ROOFTOP - CONTINUOUS

    Silus watches Lilly from the shadows.

    Silus, Lilly
  53. 53. INT. BROTHERHOOD BUILDING, CELL - CONTINUOUS

    Edgar continues to bang his head against the glass.

    Edgar
  54. 54. INT. LILLY'S APARTMENT - DAY

    Lilly, Jones, and Steph watch a television report about Silus.

    Lilly, Jones, Steph
  55. 55. INT. CEREMONIAL CHAPEL - DAY

    Silus is confirmed in his new rank by Augustus.

    Silus, Augustus
  56. 56. INT. BROTHERHOOD BUILDING, SECURITY CONTROL ROOM - CONTINUOUS

    Edgar escapes his cell.

    Edgar, Professor Liepsky
  57. 57. INT. BROTHERHOOD BUILDING, HALL - DAY

    Edgar kills guards while escaping.

    Edgar
  58. 58. INT. BROTHERHOOD BUILDING, FOYER - DAY

    Edgar confronts the receptionist.

    Edgar
  59. 59. INT. BROTHERHOOD BUILDING, HALL - LATER

    Silus and Augustus discuss the implications of Edgar's escape.

    Silus, Augustus
  60. 60. INT. JAMESTOWN SUBWAY - SUNSET

    Subway trains pass through tunnels.

  61. 61. INT. JAMESTOWN SUBWAY EXIT - CONTINUOUS

    Lilly emerges from the subway.

    Lilly
  62. 62. EXT. JAMESTOWN SLUM, ALLEYWAY - CONTINUOUS

    Steph confronts Freddy, but is attacked by Edgar.

    Steph, Edgar
  63. 63. EXT. JAMESTOWN CLUBLAND, STREET - NIGHT

    Lilly encounters a man who turns out to be a parishioner, then meets Silus.

    Lilly, Silus, Jones
  64. 64. INT. LILLY'S APARTMENT, LOUNGE - NIGHT

    Jones and Silus discuss Steph's disappearance.

    Lilly, Silus, Jones
  65. 65. INT. LOUNGE - NIGHT

    Jones and Silus discuss Steph's kidnapping and realize Edgar is targeting Lilly.

    Jones, Silus, Lilly, Steph
  66. 66. INT. JAMESTOWN SLUM, HIDEOUT - SUNSET

    Tracking shot through a derelict warehouse hideout.

  67. 67. INT. JAMESTOWN SLUM, HIDEOUT, CELL - CONTINUOUS

    Freddy drains blood from a sick, chained Steph.

    Steph, Edgar
  68. 68. INT. JAMESTOWN SLUM, HIDEOUT - CONTINUOUS

    Freddy searches for Edgar.

    Edgar
  69. 69. EXT. LILLY'S APARTMENT - NIGHT

    Edgar stalks Lilly's apartment from the outside.

    Edgar
  70. 70. INT. LILLY'S APARTMENT - CONTINUOUS

    POV shot moving through the dark apartment.

  71. 71. INT. LILLY'S APARTMENT, BEDROOM - CONTINUOUS

    Silus watches over a sleeping Lilly.

    Lilly, Silus, Jones
  72. 72. INT. APARTMENT BELOW LILLY'S - CONTINUOUS

    Edgar hears the commotion above.

    Edgar, Lilly
  73. 73. INT. LILLY'S APARTMENT, BEDROOM - CONTINUOUS

    Silus discovers Edgar has escaped.

    Silus, Jones, Lilly
  74. 74. INT. LILLY'S APARTMENT, HALLWAY - CONTINUOUS

    Lilly pursues Edgar.

    Lilly, Jones
  75. 75. INT. APARTMENT ADJACENT TO LILLY'S - CONTINUOUS

    Lilly moves through the adjacent apartment.

    Lilly
  76. 76. EXT. LILLY'S APARTMENT, REAR - CONTINUOUS

    Silus and Edgar fight.

    Lilly, Edgar, Silus, Jones
  77. 77. INT. JAMESTOWN SLUM, HIDEOUT, TOILET - DAY

    Edgar kills Freddy.

    Edgar, Steph
  78. 78. EXT. JAMESTOWN SLUM, ALLEYWAY - DAY

    Edgar leaves a sick Steph in the alley.

    Steph, Edgar
  79. 79. INT. HOSPITAL, HALLWAY - DAY

    Jones and Dominic arrive at the hospital.

    Jones, Dominic, Silus
  80. 80. INT. HOSPITAL, ISOLATION WARD - CONTINUOUS

    Jones and Dominic observe Steph.

    Jones, Dominic, Silus

Dialogue examples

Exactly. If a white man kills, then he is just a killer. If a black man kills, then all black men are suspect. That is the nature of prejudice. Those who are different are grouped together. If only one Brother does a bad thing then all Brothers are suspect, because we are different. And then what would this world be like, if there was no hope?

Silus / Scene 30

Lilly, you're the least prejudiced person I know. In fact, you're the only one I know. That's important. The church is powerful, but more than that, people's faith in the Brotherhood is about all they've got these days. And the government knows it. Even the Queen herself is involved. This is political.

Anderson / Scene 28

Influenza. My husband was quick. But my daughter, Mary, her little body fought it for a long time. So I just waited. Hoped. But then you realize how cruel hope is. And you just want it to end. Not to stop her suffering, but to stop my own.

Lilly / Scene 39

Since not one Brother has been born in 70 years. And never a female of your kind from which we could breed. And we need to breed more Brothers. You give the world hope. To the people you're like gods walking the earth.

Professor Liepsky / Scene 45

Do you like the world I am making for us, Silus? I haven't had your little policewoman yet. But I will soon. You'll just have to find me. You know where I am. Everything flows from me. Remember that...

Edgar / Scene 86

What I am saying to you is that Brother Edgar's behavior is aberrant. We don't understand it. And therefore it's difficult to predict. The only thing we know is where he will strike next.

Silus / Scene 31

There are members of the inner circle who question the way you have handled this. Blame you for this man's actions. I have made it clear that you will fix this. That you will silence him.

Augustus / Scene 87

The world is insane. I am better than you. But they force me to serve you. Does that happen in a sane world? Forced to watch you waste the most precious thing you have. Life.

Edgar / Scene 81

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