1Opening Image
Scene 1 / Page 1 / 1% target
10% Introduces the violent world of mob politics and Tom’s role observing tension between Caspar and Leo.
I'm talkin' about friendship. I'm talkin' about character. I'm talkin' about--hell, Leo, I ain't embarassed to use the...
2Theme Stated
Scene 5 / 5% target
10% Leo warns Tom of the stakes and hints at loyalty and betrayal as core themes.
I know what you're thinking: What else is new? But the situation now, I'm worried.
3Set-Up
Scenes 3-6 / 10% target
11% We learn Tom’s position, his hangover, the missing hat, and his connection to Verna and Leo.
4Catalyst
Scenes 7-8 / 12% target
10% The discovery and news of Rug Daniels’ murder propels Tom into action and investigation.
5Debate
Scenes 9-11 / 20% target
11% Tom weighs involvement—arguing strategy with Leo and the Mayor and confronting Verna’s influence.
Maybe they're right not to like it. Stirring up this hornets' nest won't be good for anyone. And...
6Break into Two
Scene 16 / 25% target
12% Tom agrees to meet Caspar and consider betraying Leo, crossing into the criminal underworld’s conflict.
I want everybody to be friends. I do this, you're friends with Lazarre, he's friends with you, and...
7B Story
Scene 6 / 30% target
10% Tom’s clandestine relationship with Verna deepens, providing emotional stakes alongside the main plot.
8Fun and Games
Scenes 17-32 / 40% target
10% A series of raids, shootouts, betrayals, and bar interrogations illustrate the thrill and danger of Tom’s world.
9Midpoint
Scene 31 / 50% target
11% After Leo’s assassination attempt, Tom realizes loyalty costs lives, raising the stakes dramatically.
We are, for the nonce.
10Bad Guys Close In
Scenes 35-44 / 65% target
10% Caspar’s men close in: Bernie threatens Tom, Bluepoint interrogates Verna, and Tom is beaten.
11All Is Lost
Scenes 39-40 / 75% target
11% Tom appears prepared to kill Bernie in the woods, hitting his darkest moment of moral compromise.
Mink was robbin' me right along with the Motzah.
12Dark Night of the Soul
Scenes 40-41 / 80% target
11% After sparing Bernie, Tom wrestles with his conscience and the web of lies he’s spun.
13Break into Three
Scene 52 / 85% target
10% Tom sets his final plan in motion by confronting Caspar and the Mayor politically.
Leo ain't running things! I ain't innarested in ancient history! I'm running things now!
14Finale
Scenes 55-59 / 95% target
12% Tom orchestrates Bluepoint’s death, fakes Caspar’s demise, and lures Bernie, resolving the power struggle.
That ain't all we know, smart guy.
15Final Image
Scene 62 / 99% target
11% At Bernie’s funeral, Tom and Leo share a tense farewell, closing the cycle of loyalty and betrayal.
Jesus, Tom! I'd give anything if you'd work for me again! I know I've made some bonehead plays!...