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KALIFORNIA script

Brian Kessler, a graduate student researching serial killers, and his photographer girlfriend, Carrie Laughlin, plan a cross-country trip to California to write a book on the subject. They post a ride-share advertisement and are joined by Early Grayce, a volatile ex-con, and his naive girlfriend, Adele Corners, unaware that Early is a dangerous sociopath who has just murdered his landlord and burned down his trailer. As they travel, Early's violent tendencies escalate, beginning with a theft at a murder site Brian is researching, followed by a brutal murder at a gas station and a bar fight, which Brian witnesses but struggles to comprehend. Carrie discovers Early is a wanted murderer on the news, and the couple becomes Early's captives, forced to witness his escalating violence, including the murder of two police officers and the elderly Musgraves, before Early kills Adele and flees with Carrie.

Writer
Tim Metcalfe
IMDb ID (imdb_id)
tt0107302
Script date
SHOOTING DRAFT
72Scenes
9Characters
84Pages
8Dialogue samples

Save the Cat beat sheet

KALIFORNIA Save the Cat analysis

Brian and Carrie, two true-crime writers, pick up drifter Early Grayce and his partner Adele for a cross-country trip to California.

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Key characters

Early Grayce

Early Grayce is listed as Antagonist / Serial Killer. 25, athletic build, big watery eyes, jet black hair, sociopathic. In the parsed data, Early Grayce is connected to 45 scenes, 91 dialogue lines, 94 text mentions, first appearing around scene 18.

45 scenes / 91 dialogue lines

Brian Kessler

Brian Kessler is listed as Protagonist / Writer. 25, short chopped hair, dressed in black, graduate student researching serial killers. In the parsed data, Brian Kessler is connected to 43 scenes, 78 dialogue lines, 79 text mentions, first appearing around scene 4.

43 scenes / 78 dialogue lines

Carrie Laughlin

Carrie Laughlin is listed as Protagonist / Photographer. 25, short black hair, tight black clothes, Brian's partner. In the parsed data, Carrie Laughlin is connected to 43 scenes, 61 dialogue lines, 61 text mentions, first appearing around scene 15.

43 scenes / 61 dialogue lines

Adele Corners

Adele Corners is listed as Early's Girlfriend. 17, pretty, uneducated, Early's girlfriend. In the parsed data, Adele Corners is connected to 33 scenes, 45 dialogue lines, 45 text mentions, first appearing around scene 18.

33 scenes / 45 dialogue lines

Pretty Teenage Girl

Pretty Teenage Girl is listed as Victim. Pretty, wearing red high-heeled shoes. In the parsed data, Pretty Teenage Girl is connected to 7 scenes, 5 dialogue lines, 5 text mentions, first appearing around scene 3.

7 scenes / 5 dialogue lines

Mrs. Musgrave

Mrs. Musgrave is listed as Victim. Attractive older woman with silver hair. In the parsed data, Mrs. Musgrave is connected to 5 scenes, 3 dialogue lines, 3 text mentions, first appearing around scene 59.

5 scenes / 3 dialogue lines

Parole Officer

Parole Officer is listed as Authority Figure. Has a prosthetic hand, suffers from hiccups. In the parsed data, Parole Officer is connected to 5 scenes, 1 dialogue line, 1 text mention, first appearing around scene 24.

5 scenes / 1 dialogue lines

John Diebold

John Diebold is listed as Landlord. Early's landlord, owns pitbulls. In the parsed data, John Diebold is connected to 2 scenes, first appearing around scene 25.

2 scenes / 0 dialogue lines

Mr. Musgrave

Mr. Musgrave is listed as Victim. Elderly man, amateur astronomer. In the parsed data, Mr. Musgrave is connected to 1 scene, first appearing around scene 59.

1 scenes / 0 dialogue lines

Scene outline

  1. 1. EXT. Urban/Industrial Landscape - NIGHT

    A mysterious rock is unearthed from mud by strong male hands.

  2. 2. EXT. City Street - NIGHT

    A pretty teenage girl is picked up by a driver in a 70's Chevy.

    Pretty Teenage Girl
  3. 3. INT. 70's Chevy - NIGHT

    The driver picks up the girl; she appears injured and nervous.

    Pretty Teenage Girl
  4. 4. INT. Roofless Old Warehouse - NIGHT

    Brian and Carrie document a crime scene.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin
  5. 5. EXT. Construction Site - NIGHT

    A faceless figure hides the rock under his jacket.

  6. 6. INT. Roofless Old Warehouse - NIGHT

    Brian continues his research on the serial killer's history.

    Brian Kessler
  7. 7. INT. 70's Chevy - NIGHT

    The driver and the girl talk about her problems.

    Pretty Teenage Girl
  8. 8. INT. Roofless Old Warehouse - NIGHT

    Brian details the murders committed at the warehouse.

    Brian Kessler
  9. 9. INT. 70's Chevy - NIGHT

    The girl asks for a lighter.

    Pretty Teenage Girl
  10. 10. INT. Roofless Old Warehouse - NIGHT

    Brian theorizes about the killer's motivations.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin
  11. 11. INT. 70's Chevy - NIGHT

    The girl prepares to use the lighter while the driver watches.

    Pretty Teenage Girl
  12. 12. INT. Roofless Old Warehouse - NIGHT

    Brian and Carrie investigate the rafters.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin
  13. 13. INT. 70's Chevy - NIGHT

    The rock crashes through the windshield.

    Pretty Teenage Girl
  14. 14. EXT. Freeway - NIGHT

    Early Grayce watches the aftermath of the crash.

    Early Grayce
  15. 15. INT. Apartment - NIGHT

    Brian plays a game at a party.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin
  16. 16. INT. Apartment Kitchen - NIGHT

    Brian and his friends discuss serial killers.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin
  17. 17. EXT. Lucky Street Grill - NIGHT

    Early arrives at the diner.

    Early Grayce
  18. 18. INT. Diner - NIGHT

    Early meets Adele at the diner.

    Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  19. 19. INT. Brian and Carrie's Loft - NIGHT

    Brian and Carrie return home from the party.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin
  20. 20. INT. Early's Trailer - MORNING

    Adele waters her cactus while Early sleeps.

    Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  21. 21. EXT. Early's Trailer - LATE MORNING

    Adele warns Early about the landlord.

    Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  22. 22. INT. Brian and Carrie's Loft - AFTERNOON

    Carrie expresses her desire to leave for California.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin
  23. 23. INT. Brian's Loft - NIGHT

    Brian and Carrie discuss their plan to travel to California to write a book about serial killers.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin
  24. 24. EXT. Early's Trailer - LATE AFTERNOON

    Early returns home to find his Parole Officer searching his trailer.

    Early Grayce, Parole Officer
  25. 25. EXT. Early's Trailer - DAWN

    Early has a confrontation with his landlord, Diebold, before fleeing.

    Early Grayce, Adele Corners, John Diebold
  26. 26. EXT. University Parking Lot - DAY

    Brian posts a ride-share note for his trip.

    Brian Kessler
  27. 27. EXT. Early's Trailer - NIGHT

    Early and Adele discuss their dreams of California while Early digs a hole.

    Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  28. 28. EXT. Bus Station - DAWN

    Brian and Carrie meet Early and Adele to begin their trip.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  29. 29. EXT. Early's Trailer - DAWN

    Police investigate the burning of Early's trailer and discover a body.

    Parole Officer, John Diebold
  30. 30. EXT. Country Road - DAY

    Early, Adele, Brian, and Carrie drive down a country road; Early hands out drinks and hangs a St. Christopher statue.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  31. 31. INT. Lincoln - DAY

    Adele takes photos of the scenery and asks to stop at Pigeon Forge.

    Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  32. 32. EXT. Baxter Farm - AFTERNOON

    The group visits the site of a murder; Brian records notes while Carrie takes photos; Early attempts to steal a purse.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  33. 33. INT. Motel Restaurant - NIGHT

    The group eats dinner; Early displays poor table manners and scratches his foot.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  34. 34. INT. Motel Rooms - NIGHT

    Brian and Carrie argue about Early; Early and Adele prepare for bed.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  35. 35. INT. Motel Diner - MORNING

    Early meets Brian and Carrie for breakfast; Adele arrives with a new haircut.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  36. 36. EXT. Highway - NOON

    The Lincoln gets a flat tire; Early changes it while Carrie observes.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  37. 37. EXT. Gas Station - DAY

    The group stops for gas; Early eyes a wealthy man's money clip.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  38. 38. EXT. Gas Pump Island - DAY

    Early murders a man in the bathroom while Brian and the women wait at the gas pumps.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  39. 39. INT. Lincoln - DAY

    Early and Brian discuss serial killers while driving.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  40. 40. EXT. Motel - DUSK

    Brian and Early leave for the bar while Carrie and Adele stay behind.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  41. 41. INT. Bowling Alley Bar - NIGHT

    Early and Brian visit a bar where Early gets into a violent fight.

    Brian Kessler, Early Grayce
  42. 42. INT. Motel Room - NIGHT

    Carrie cuts Adele's hair and they discuss Early's abusive behavior.

    Carrie Laughlin, Adele Corners
  43. 43. EXT. Bowling Alley Bar - NIGHT

    Early and Brian leave the bar and discuss 'doors' to other dimensions.

    Brian Kessler, Early Grayce
  44. 44. INT. Motel Room - NIGHT

    Brian and Carrie argue about Early.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin
  45. 45. EXT. Motel Corridor - NIGHT

    Carrie encounters Early at the ice machine.

    Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce
  46. 46. INT. Lincoln - MORNING

    The group travels in the Lincoln; Adele shares a hangover remedy while Brian suffers.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  47. 47. INT. Lincoln - DAY

    Carrie notices a gun in Adele's bag and stops the car.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  48. 48. EXT. Desert - DAY

    Early teaches Brian how to shoot a gun.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  49. 49. INT. Abattoir - AFTERNOON

    Brian and Carrie explore the abandoned abattoir to take photos.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  50. 50. INT. Gas Station - TWILIGHT

    Carrie discovers Early is a wanted murderer on the news.

    Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce, Adele Corners, Parole Officer
  51. 51. INT. Abandoned Store - MORNING

    The group eats Chinese food while Brian and Carrie are held captive.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  52. 52. INT. Lincoln driving down backroads - DAY

    Early and Adele drive with Brian and Carrie bound in the back seat; Early discusses his recent murder.

    Early Grayce, Adele Corners, Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin
  53. 53. EXT. Old deserted mine area - DAY

    Early takes Brian to the mine while Adele stays with Carrie; Early takes photos of the site.

    Early Grayce, Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin, Adele Corners
  54. 54. INT. Old mine building - DAY

    Early interrogates Brian about his motives for killing.

    Early Grayce, Brian Kessler
  55. 55. EXT. Lincoln near mine area - DAY

    Carrie tries to warn Adele about Early; police arrive.

    Carrie Laughlin, Adele Corners, Parole Officer
  56. 56. EXT. Mine area - DAY

    Early kills the police officers.

    Early Grayce, Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin, Adele Corners, Parole Officer
  57. 57. INT. Lincoln - DAY

    Early berates Adele for not thanking him for saving her life.

    Early Grayce, Adele Corners, Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin
  58. 58. EXT. Musgrave House - DUSK

    Early and Carrie enter the Musgrave house while Adele stays in the car with Brian.

    Early Grayce, Carrie Laughlin, Adele Corners, Brian Kessler, Mrs. Musgrave
  59. 59. INT. Musgrave Living Room - NIGHT

    Early terrorizes the Musgraves; Brian and Carrie are bound.

    Early Grayce, Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin, Mrs. Musgrave, Mr. Musgrave, Adele Corners
  60. 60. EXT. Musgrave House - MORNING

    Early leaves with Carrie, leaving Adele's body behind.

    Early Grayce, Carrie Laughlin, Adele Corners
  61. 61. INT. LINCOLN - DAY

    Early and Carrie discuss finding a way out of the desert while driving.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce
  62. 62. EXT. MUSGRAVE HOUSE - NIGHT

    The Lincoln drives away, revealing Adele's body.

    Early Grayce, Adele Corners
  63. 63. INT. MUSGRAVE LIVING ROOM - MORNING

    Brian regains consciousness and is helped by Mrs. Musgrave.

    Brian Kessler, Mrs. Musgrave
  64. 64. INT. LINCOLN - SAME TIME

    Early intimidates and threatens Carrie while driving.

    Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce
  65. 65. INT. MUSGRAVE LIVING ROOM - MORNING

    Brian prepares to pursue Early.

    Brian Kessler, Mrs. Musgrave
  66. 66. EXT. MUSGRAVE HOUSE - NEXT MOMENT

    Brian leaves to chase Early.

    Brian Kessler, Mrs. Musgrave
  67. 67. INT. LINCOLN - SAME TIME

    Early and Carrie drive through a gate.

    Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce
  68. 68. INT. LINCOLN - LATER

    The Lincoln breaks down.

    Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce
  69. 69. INT. 50'S DESERT HOUSE - LATE AFTERNOON

    Early and Carrie break into a desert house.

    Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce
  70. 70. INT. 50'S DESERT HOUSE - NIGHT

    Early and Carrie spend the night in the house.

    Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce
  71. 71. INT. PICKUP TRUCK - NIGHT

    Brian crashes into the Lincoln.

    Brian Kessler
  72. 72. INT. 50'S DESERT HOUSE - DAWN

    Early wakes up and finds a 'door' of light.

    Brian Kessler, Carrie Laughlin, Early Grayce

Dialogue examples

You know those doors I was talking about? Found two of them back in Kentucky. Shit, I wasn't even looking for one the first time. Me and the boys are just swingin' our sickles by the side of the road, and I turned around and there it was... this door with this bright blinding white light all around it... course I'm thinkin' I must be sunstroked or somethin'... so I close my eyes figurin' I'll count ten and it'll be gone right... so I'm countin'... 1-2-3-4-5... an' I'm 'bout ta piss myself right... -6-7-8-9... 10. An' I open my eyes slow, spectin' it won't be there right...

Early Grayce / Scene 43

...When I was fourteen years old three boys raped me in the back of a truck, and beat me so bad I was in bed for almost four months... I feel safe with Early, most the time he treats me pretty good. And I know he wouldn't let nothin' like that ever happen to me again...

Adele Corners / Scene 42

I always thought it was the work of a serial killer. Anyone who took that much time and care bisecting another human being must have been enjoying it and would have done it again. And again. Until someone stopped him.

Brian Kessler / Scene 39

I'm scared. A week ago you would never have even thought to pick up that gun. This afternoon you're out there wielding it around like Clyde fucking Barrow, for Christ's sake! What's with you?

Carrie Laughlin / Scene 49

He's pulled out all the lines. The nearest phone is twenty miles east of here.

Mrs. Musgrave / Scene 65

Shit, it ain't hard to play pool. I can teach you everything ya need ta know.

Early Grayce / Scene 41

...Well I probably drunk more than my share, anyway... you go on an' have it.

Early Grayce / Scene 43

Of course! Nobody would have heard her cries over the noise of the machines.

Brian Kessler / Scene 6

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