1Opening Image
Scene 1 / Page 1 / 1% target
20% Introduces Shelly Levene’s plea for better leads, establishing the world of cutthroat sales and desperation.
The Glengarry Highland's leads, you're sending Roma out. Fine. He's a good man. We know what he is....
2Theme Stated
Scene 3 / Pages 1-2 / 5% target
20% Roma’s philosophical jab about life’s compromises hints at the moral cost of their work.
all train compartments smell vaguely of shit. It gets so you don't mind it.
3Set-Up
Scene 4 / Pages 2-3 / 10% target
20% The robbed office and police arrival establish the stakes: lost contracts, lost credibility, and rising tension among the salesmen.
Williamson...Williamson, they stole the contracts...?
4Catalyst
Scene 2 / Page 1 / 12% target
20% Moss plants the idea of an office burglary, setting the inciting crime in motion.
Someone should rob the office.
5Debate
Scene 6 / Pages 3-4 / 20% target
20% Levene pressures Williamson for better leads, questioning how far they’ll go to succeed.
Send me out! Send me out!
6Break into Two
Scene 4 / Pages 2-3 / 25% target
20% The aftermath of the robbery forces the team into a new reality of suspicion and urgency.
7B Story
Scene 3 / Pages 1-2 / 30% target
20% Roma’s interaction with Lingk provides a personal counterpoint to the office drama.
My name is Richard Roma, what's yours?
8Fun and Games
Scene 5 / Pages 4-5 / 40% target
20% Salesmen banter about the robbery and share boasting-filled anecdotes, showcasing their competitive dynamics.
Eighty-two thousand dollars.
9Midpoint
Scene 9 / Pages 6-7 / 50% target
20% Roma explodes at Williamson for costing him a sale, marking a high-tension shift.
You stupid fucking cunt. You, Williamson...I'm talking to you, shithead...You just cost me six thousand dollars.
10Bad Guys Close In
Scene 6 / Pages 3-4 / 65% target
20% Lingk’s threat to cancel and Williamson’s blunder tighten the noose around Roma’s deal.
My wife said I have to cancel the deal.
11All Is Lost
Scene 10 / Pages 7-8 / 75% target
20% Levene’s confession to the robbery represents the nadir of the team’s ambition.
I sold them to Jerry Graff.
12Dark Night of the Soul
Scene 11 / Page 8 / 80% target
20% Levene is taken away as Roma reflects on loyalty and shared loss.
I GET HIS ACTION. My stuff is mine, whatever he gets for himself, I'm talking half. You put...
13Break into Three
Scene 8 / Pages 6-7 / 85% target
20% Williamson’s revelation about the cashed check forces a last-ditch effort to salvage deals.
Your check as cashed yesterday afternoon. And we're completely insured, as you know, in any case.
14Finale
Scenes 10-11 / Pages 7-8 / 95% target
20% The team’s schemes unravel as confessions and police involvement conclude the action.
15Final Image
Scene 11 / Page 8 / 99% target
20% The detectives lead Levene away, mirroring the opening’s desperation but offering no escape.