Opening Image
Scene 1 / Page 1 / 1% target
Introduces family bonds and stakes as Nacona bids farewell to his son before the campaign.
Next time, next time. Today, I need you to look out for your mother, your sisters.
ENEMY script analysis
A Spanish expedition across the prairie clashes with Comanche warriors, centering on Captain Tomás (“Horse Killer”) and Comanche leader Nacona. The two sides engage in skirmishes, personal loss, and moments of mutual respect as both Tomás and Nacona confront the cost of their conflict. Themes of cultural misunderstanding, leadership, and survival emerge as the journey escalates to a final, decisive battle.
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Scene 1 / Page 1 / 1% target
Introduces family bonds and stakes as Nacona bids farewell to his son before the campaign.
Next time, next time. Today, I need you to look out for your mother, your sisters.
Scene 2 / Page 1 / 5% target
Padre Francisco and Captain Tomás discuss the violent nature of the Comanche, hinting at cultural clash and understanding.
A people more likely to take your scalp than take to Scripture.
Scenes 1-4 / Pages 1-2 / 10% target
Establishes both Spanish and Comanche forces, their leaders, relationships, and initial confrontation in which Tosahwi is killed.
Scene 4 / Page 2 / 12% target
Cristóbal kills Nacona’s son Tosahwi, igniting a personal vendetta and deepening the conflict.
Boys become men. Men who want your scalp and, more importantly, mine.
Scenes 6-7 / Pages 3-4 / 20% target
Both sides assess losses and question tactics—Spanish tend wounds while Comanche debate strength and cleverness of Horse Killer.
Not only is he more fierce than other Spanish, he is more clever.
Scene 9 / Page 5 / 25% target
Spanish hold back their men from retrieving a fallen Comanche, marking the shift from pursuit to cautious engagement.
Scenes 10-11 / Pages 5-6 / 30% target
Intercuts Comanche preparations with Spanish strategic debate, introducing interpersonal tensions among Tomás, Cristóbal, and soldiers.
They will lose interest. We must just keep moving until then.
Scene 14 / Page 7 / 40% target
Tomás teaches his men about Comanche culture and faces minor skirmishes, providing insight into both sides’ strengths.
Scene 17 / Page 9 / 50% target
In a quiet night scene, Tomás and Baltasar share personal stories, turning the external war into internal stakes.
Scenes 22-23 / Page 12 / 65% target
Tensions peak as Ten Sticks charges the Spanish to steal a hat and Two Bears dies, intensifying hostilities.
Scene 26 / Page 13 / 75% target
Cristóbal is bitten by a rattlesnake, incapacitating Tomás’s second-in-command and raising doubts about survival.
Scene 27 / Page 13 / 80% target
Tomás tends to Cristóbal’s snake bite through the night, reflecting on loss and duty.
Scene 29 / Page 14 / 85% target
Tomás decides to leave Cristóbal behind and push forward with Baltasar and Héctor, recommitting to the mission.
Scenes 32-33 / Pages 15-16 / 95% target
Nacona confronts Tomás directly, Hector is killed, and both sides charge, culminating the cycle of conflict in a large-scale battle.
Horse Killer. I’m pleased to see you’re still alive.
Scene 34 / Page 16 / 99% target
Tomás and Baltasar overlook a Spanish village after the battle, contrasting the journey’s brutal opening image.