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ENEMY script analysis

ENEMY script - Save the Cat beat sheet analysis

A Spanish expedition across the prairie clashes with Comanche warriors, centering on Captain Tomás (“Horse Killer”) and Comanche leader Nacona. The two sides engage in skirmishes, personal loss, and moments of mutual respect as both Tomás and Nacona confront the cost of their conflict. Themes of cultural misunderstanding, leadership, and survival emerge as the journey escalates to a final, decisive battle.

75 Save the Cat fit score 70% analysis confidence / 34 parsed scenes

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1

Opening Image

Scene 1 / Page 1 / 1% target

65%

Introduces family bonds and stakes as Nacona bids farewell to his son before the campaign.

Next time, next time. Today, I need you to look out for your mother, your sisters.
2

Theme Stated

Scene 2 / Page 1 / 5% target

60%

Padre Francisco and Captain Tomás discuss the violent nature of the Comanche, hinting at cultural clash and understanding.

A people more likely to take your scalp than take to Scripture.
3

Set-Up

Scenes 1-4 / Pages 1-2 / 10% target

70%

Establishes both Spanish and Comanche forces, their leaders, relationships, and initial confrontation in which Tosahwi is killed.

4

Catalyst

Scene 4 / Page 2 / 12% target

75%

Cristóbal kills Nacona’s son Tosahwi, igniting a personal vendetta and deepening the conflict.

Boys become men. Men who want your scalp and, more importantly, mine.
5

Debate

Scenes 6-7 / Pages 3-4 / 20% target

65%

Both sides assess losses and question tactics—Spanish tend wounds while Comanche debate strength and cleverness of Horse Killer.

Not only is he more fierce than other Spanish, he is more clever.
6

Break into Two

Scene 9 / Page 5 / 25% target

60%

Spanish hold back their men from retrieving a fallen Comanche, marking the shift from pursuit to cautious engagement.

7

B Story

Scenes 10-11 / Pages 5-6 / 30% target

65%

Intercuts Comanche preparations with Spanish strategic debate, introducing interpersonal tensions among Tomás, Cristóbal, and soldiers.

They will lose interest. We must just keep moving until then.
8

Fun and Games

Scene 14 / Page 7 / 40% target

60%

Tomás teaches his men about Comanche culture and faces minor skirmishes, providing insight into both sides’ strengths.

9

Midpoint

Scene 17 / Page 9 / 50% target

55%

In a quiet night scene, Tomás and Baltasar share personal stories, turning the external war into internal stakes.

10

Bad Guys Close In

Scenes 22-23 / Page 12 / 65% target

65%

Tensions peak as Ten Sticks charges the Spanish to steal a hat and Two Bears dies, intensifying hostilities.

11

All Is Lost

Scene 26 / Page 13 / 75% target

70%

Cristóbal is bitten by a rattlesnake, incapacitating Tomás’s second-in-command and raising doubts about survival.

12

Dark Night of the Soul

Scene 27 / Page 13 / 80% target

65%

Tomás tends to Cristóbal’s snake bite through the night, reflecting on loss and duty.

13

Break into Three

Scene 29 / Page 14 / 85% target

60%

Tomás decides to leave Cristóbal behind and push forward with Baltasar and Héctor, recommitting to the mission.

14

Finale

Scenes 32-33 / Pages 15-16 / 95% target

70%

Nacona confronts Tomás directly, Hector is killed, and both sides charge, culminating the cycle of conflict in a large-scale battle.

Horse Killer. I’m pleased to see you’re still alive.
15

Final Image

Scene 34 / Page 16 / 99% target

60%

Tomás and Baltasar overlook a Spanish village after the battle, contrasting the journey’s brutal opening image.