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Carnage script analysis

Carnage script - Save the Cat beat sheet analysis

Two middle-class couples meet to draft a joint statement after their sons clash on a playground. As sniping and social posturing escalate, petty grievances give way to outright chaos, revealing deeper fractures in their relationships. A small act of kindness toward a lost hamster later offers a moment of reconciliation for the children, contrasting the adults’ failure.

60 Save the Cat fit score 20% analysis confidence / 22 parsed scenes

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1

Opening Image

Scene 1 / Page 1 / 1% target

30%

Introduces the inciting incident—two boys fight over a stick in the park—setting the stage for parental intervention.

2

Theme Stated

Scene 5 / Page 2 / 5% target

25%

Penelope warns against fanning the flames, hinting at the theme of escalating conflict vs. resolution.

No. No letters to the editor. You'll just fan the flames.
3

Set-Up

Scenes 2-3 / Pages 1-2 / 10% target

30%

Both couples convene in the Longstreet home, drafting statements and revealing personality differences.

January 11, at 2:30 PM. You’ll make your statement separately, this is ours. ...following a verbal dispute in...
4

Catalyst

Scene 10 / Page 3 / 12% target

35%

Nancy vomits on Alan and the art books, abruptly derailing any hope of civil discussion.

I'm going to throw up.
5

Debate

Scenes 6-8 / Pages 2-3 / 20% target

25%

The couples argue logistics of a boys’ meeting, art preferences and the press, debating how far to escalate.

6

Break into Two

Scene 10 / Page 3 / 25% target

20%

The vomit incident pushes them into a new act of relentless confrontation.

7

B Story

Scene 21 / Page 6 / 30% target

30%

Discovery of the lost hamster and the boys playing peacefully offers a parallel subplot about reconciliation.

8

Fun and Games

Scenes 12-17 / Pages 4-5 / 40% target

25%

A series of cleaning efforts, art book repairs, and petty squabbles showcase the couples’ absurd extremes.

9

Midpoint

Scene 20 / Page 5 / 50% target

30%

The adults hit a peak of chaos—drinking, phone calls, and name-calling—raising the stakes dramatically.

What a freaking nightmare!
10

Bad Guys Close In

Scene 22 / Page 6 / 65% target

30%

Arguments escalate into outright destruction of property and emotional outbursts.

We had a goddamn hamster, didn't we?
11

All Is Lost

Scene 22 / Page 6 / 75% target

25%

The adults’ meltdown seems irreversible as personal attacks reach a nadir.

12

Dark Night of the Soul

Scene 19 / Page 5 / 80% target

25%

In the bathroom, private confessions reveal regret and exasperation.

That was un-fucking-believable, what you did.
13

Break into Three

Scene 21 / Page 6 / 85% target

30%

Finding the hamster alive and the boys playing signals a new perspective and hope.

14

Finale

Scene 22 / Page 6 / 95% target

25%

The adults return to the living room for a final showdown, failing to emulate the children’s reconciliation.

You can't smoke in a house with an asthmatic child! And stop telling him your whole life story.
15

Final Image

Scene 21 / Page 6 / 99% target

30%

Contrasting image of the boys playing amicably with the hamster underscores the adults’ lost opportunity.