1Opening Image
Scene 1 / Page 1 / 1% target
15% Nadine dramatically ends her friendship while standing alone at the Norfolk pond, visually establishing her isolation.
I just called to tell you I'm chucking everything you ever gave me into the Norfolk pond.
2Theme Stated
Scene 2 / Page 1 / 5% target
10% Young Krista and Nadine bond over introductions, hinting that friendship is defined by choice and mutual support.
My name's Krista, what's yours?
3Set-Up
Scenes 3-5 / Pages 1-3 / 10% target
14% We see Nadine’s social life at school, her contempt for peers, and the entrance of love interest Erwin, establishing her world and desires.
I hate every single person we go to school with.
4Catalyst
Scene 6 / Page 3 / 12% target
13% Darian and Krista unexpectedly kiss at the hotel, upending Nadine’s friendship and inciting conflict.
I'm boning a Pygmy goat.
5Debate
Scene 9 / Page 5 / 20% target
12% Nadine confronts the awkward tension between Krista and Darian, questioning the future of her relationships.
So this is what you guys did last night? Silently chewed your food and stared at each other?...
6Break into Two
Scenes 10-12 / Pages 5-7 / 25% target
11% Nadine steps into a proactive role—seeking advice from her mom, giving herself a pep talk, and challenging Darian in the hallway—committing to resolve her conflicts.
You're gonna be okay.
7B Story
Scene 13 / Page 7 / 30% target
10% Erwin shares a Korean proverb, deepening the romantic subplot and offering emotional guidance.
It's...a Korean proverb.
8Fun and Games
Scenes 14-16 / Pages 7-9 / 40% target
13% Nadine and Krista navigate strained social outings—dinner, bowling, and confrontation with peers—exploring the highs and lows of their friendship post-conflict.
9Midpoint
Scene 17 / Page 9 / 50% target
14% Nadine and Krista erupt in a massive argument in her bedroom, marking a false defeat where their bond seems irreparably broken.
I don't want be a freaking hotdog for prom! I don't want to act like it's just some...
10Bad Guys Close In
Scene 18 / Page 9 / 65% target
12% Nadine rejects Erwin’s prom invitation in chemistry class, compounding her isolation and reinforcing negative stakes.
The thing is, I just... I don't think prom's really my thing, I wasn't planning to go.
11All Is Lost
Scene 19 / Page 10 / 75% target
11% In Mona’s bathroom, Nadine feels the depth of her loneliness and the potential loss of her dearest friend.
A lot of friendships can't handle change. But the good ones... they adjust. If you really care about...
12Dark Night of the Soul
Scene 20 / Page 10 / 80% target
10% Nadine apologizes to Darian, reflecting on her failures and realizing what truly matters.
I'm sorry I was an asshole.
13Break into Three
Scene 21 / Page 10 / 85% target
10% Nadine serenades Krista outside her house, committing to rebuilding their friendship with genuine vulnerability.
14Finale
Scene 22 / Page 10 / 95% target
10% At prom, the group celebrates together, showcasing the restored bonds and Nadine’s personal growth.
15Final Image
Scene 22 / Page 10 / 99% target
10% The final prom scene mirrors the opening’s focus on Nadine but now among friends, emphasizing her journey from isolation to belonging.