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BATTLE: LOS ANGELES script analysis

BATTLE: LOS ANGELES script - Save the Cat beat sheet analysis

Battle: Los Angeles follows Sgt. Nantz and his platoon as they deploy to defend LA from an alien invasion, losing key allies and facing overwhelming odds. Through intense urban combat, the team uncovers the enemy’s command center and calls in a decisive strike, ultimately evacuating as the beachhead is secured.

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1

Opening Image

Scene 1 / Page 1 / 1% target

70%

Introduces chaotic evacuation on Pico Blvd., establishing world in crisis.

2

Theme Stated

Scene 4 / Page 4 / 5% target

60%

Lt. Martinez’s tender moment with his pregnant wife hints at personal stakes and the cost of war.

3

Set-Up

Scenes 2-6 / Pages 2-6 / 10% target

70%

We meet Nantz, his command relationships, and fellow Marines in training, wedding prep, and therapy, setting up characters and normal life.

4

Catalyst

Scene 8 / Page 8 / 12% target

60%

Alien attack sirens summon Grayston and Simmons from surfing, signaling the invasion’s arrival.

5

Debate

Scene 3 / Page 3 / 20% target

50%

Marines at the golf course discuss uncertainty, reflecting hesitation before deployment.

6

Break into Two

Scene 9 / Page 9 / 25% target

70%

Nantz receives orders to deploy, launching Act Two into combat.

7

B Story

Scene 4 / Page 4 / 30% target

60%

Nantz’s concern for Martinez’s family life establishes the emotional B-story parallel to the frontline action.

8

Fun and Games

Scenes 19-23 / Pages 19-23 / 40% target

80%

Initial street combat through ambushes and rescues shows the ‘fun’ of military action and alien engagement.

Kill anything that's not human.
9

Midpoint

Scene 28 / Page 28 / 50% target

80%

Discovery of the alien cyborg with a weapon arm raises stakes and shifts mission focus.

Look. It's been surgically modified...
10

Bad Guys Close In

Scene 33 / Page 33 / 65% target

70%

Bus ambush on the freeway intensifies enemy threat and pushes the squad to its limits.

This is Lieutenant Bennie Martinez, U.S. Marine Corps!
11

All Is Lost

Scene 40 / Page 40 / 75% target

70%

LAV loses all power near the Dead Zone, leaving the team stranded and vulnerable.

12

Dark Night of the Soul

Scene 42 / Page 42 / 80% target

70%

In the underground hallway, Nantz realizes their tech is failing and faces despair about mission success.

No. Save it. Something is killing anything electronic we use.
13

Break into Three

Scene 44 / Page 44 / 85% target

80%

Reuniting with the squad on the subway platform, Nantz calls in the decisive fire mission, pivoting to Act Three.

14

Finale

Scene 45 / Page 45 / 95% target

80%

The squad defends the laser designator while cruise missiles strike, culminating the battle against the invaders.

Hold them back! We have to keep the laser on target!
15

Final Image

Scene 46 / Page 46 / 99% target

70%

Evacuation aboard the medevac helicopter shows survivors leaving the battlefield, mirroring the opening image’s chaos now tempered with hope.