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BABYLON script analysis

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BABYLON follows the intersecting rise and fall of silent-era Hollywood hopefuls. Manny’s comedic chaos and Nellie’s wild ambition collide with Jack Conrad’s tragic resistance to sound, leading to personal and professional catastrophes before a bittersweet resolution.

80 Save the Cat fit score 76% analysis confidence / 69 parsed scenes

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1

Opening Image

Scene 1 / Page 1 / 1% target

82%

Manny hauling an elephant down a rural road sets the film’s tone of absurd ambition.

Uh, no. It’s an elephant.
2

Theme Stated

Scene 9 / Page 1 / 5% target

78%

Nellie declares “You don’t become a star…And I am,” stating the film’s theme of identity and fame.

You don’t become a star, honey. You either are one or you aren’t. And I am.
3

Set-Up

Scenes 1-7 / Page 1 / 10% target

80%

We meet Manny, the elephant, nightclub elites, and Nellie’s introduction at Don Wallach’s chaotic party.

4

Catalyst

Scene 33 / Page 1 / 12% target

75%

Jack invites Manny to be his assistant on set, pulling Manny into the movie business.

I like you. You’ll take me to set tomorrow. Want you by my side there.
5

Debate

Scenes 34-36 / Page 1 / 20% target

70%

Nellie grapples with on-set humiliation and her risky choice to get plastic surgery.

Fuck you, I ain’t icin my nipples, these are natural. You’re just sore ‘cause yours look like fuckin...
6

Break into Two

Scenes 37-40 / Page 1 / 25% target

74%

The characters fully enter the studio world as Jack embraces silent films and Nellie pursues stardom, fracturing Old Hollywood.

7

B Story

Scenes 17-20 / Page 1 / 30% target

73%

Manny and Nellie’s bond strengthens backstage, providing the emotional through-line.

8

Fun and Games

Scenes 34-38 / Page 1 / 40% target

71%

We see Nellie’s early screen success, Jack’s silent film triumphs, and the whirlwind of party life.

9

Midpoint

Scene 26 / Page 1 / 50% target

76%

Jack’s accidental gunshot and plunge foreshadows his fall from glory—a false peak turned disaster.

10

Bad Guys Close In

Scenes 40-44 / Page 1 / 65% target

78%

The introduction of sound threatens Jack’s career and complicates Nellie’s transition to talkies.

Sound is how we redefine the form!
11

All Is Lost

Scene 40 / Page 1 / 75% target

75%

Jack’s wife Olga shoots him, marking his professional and personal nadir.

12

Dark Night of the Soul

Scene 55 / Page 1 / 80% target

77%

Nellie’s drug-fueled breakdown in Manny’s house leaves both stripped of hope.

You have to stop this Nellie, I mean it, you have to stop...
13

Break into Three

Scene 60 / Page 1 / 85% target

74%

Manny and Nellie resolve to flee to Mexico, finding a new plan together.

I love you, Nellie, I love you so much, we can go to Mexico...
14

Finale

Scenes 62-63 / Page 1 / 95% target

80%

Their escape collapses as the Count and Kyle are killed and Manny must survive alone.

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Final Image

Scene 69 / Page 1 / 99% target

81%

An older Manny watches Singin’ in the Rain, reflecting on the transition he lived through.