1Opening Image
Scene 1 / Page 1 / 1% target
92% College students joking on the ferry landing establish a light, youthful tone before it turns dark.
Hi... My name is Mary O'Reilly O'Toole O'Shea and...over there is the island my friend Muffy owns... It's...
2Theme Stated
Scene 17 / Page 3 / 5% target
85% Rob reveals his rejection for lacking seriousness, hinting that taking life too casually has consequences.
He said my grades might be OK; but that basically I possess an essential lack of seriousness, and...
3Set-Up
Scenes 2-10 / Pages 1-4 / 10% target
90% We meet the main group, learn about Muffy’s inheritance and the isolated island setting.
4Catalyst
Scene 7 / Page 2 / 12% target
88% Skip and Arch’s prank almost seriously injures Buck, introducing real danger.
April Fools... you crazy jerks. You crazy motherfuckin' jerks... somebody could've gotten hurt out there!
5Debate
Scenes 30-32 / Pages 6-7 / 20% target
81% After discovering Skip’s body and his bag, the friends argue whether to stay or flee.
Where's Skip? Anybody seen him?
6Break into Two
Scene 32 / Page 7 / 25% target
75% Despite panic, the group decides to stay together in the house and investigate.
Respectable young Quaker couple returning after quiet afternoon of nonviolent sex.
7B Story
Scene 21 / Page 5 / 30% target
78% Rob and Kit reconcile, establishing their emotional connection amid the terror.
8Fun and Games
Scenes 38-45 / Pages 8-11 / 40% target
84% A sequence of mysterious deaths and discoveries (Harvey, Nikki, bodies in well) provides the thriller’s ‘promise of premise.’
9Midpoint
Scenes 44-45 / Pages 10-11 / 50% target
88% The reveal of multiple corpses in the well marks a point of no return–the situation is dire.
Boy, when she said `well,' she really meant 'well'. who dug this thing? Pocahontas?
10Bad Guys Close In
Scenes 49-57 / Pages 12-14 / 65% target
80% Locked doors, rising fear, and the first big confrontation in the living room escalate pressure.
You mean all day and you haven't noticed?
11All Is Lost
Scene 60 / Page 15 / 75% target
86% Kit is cornered by ‘Buffy,’ who turns out to be Muffy in disguise–it seems hopeless.
Buffy?... please, we didn't mean any harm... we're leaving... we just want to go home... please... please...
12Dark Night of the Soul
Scene 61 / Page 15 / 80% target
77% The prank is revealed; everyone thinks it’s over, but a false relief gives way to dread.
You guys are really terrific. I love you all. And I thank you from the bottom of my...
13Break into Three
Scene 78 / Page 18 / 85% target
82% Nikki and friends agree to ‘plan B’ in the woods, determined to escape and end the terror.
We have to go to plan B.
14Finale
Scenes 91-95 / Pages 22-24 / 95% target
85% In the attic and pantry, true villains Muffy and Skip reveal themselves and struggle for control, resolving the threat.
It's all over, Muffy! Everything'll be mine!
15Final Image
Scene 96 / Page 25 / 99% target
89% Muffy and Skip reemerge opening the inn, mirroring the opening’s carefree mood but darker in retrospect.