1Opening Image
Scene 1 / Page 1 / 1% target
45% The film opens on a sun-dappled notebook and Bob’s voice-over about Jerry’s delusion, establishing paranoia and perspective.
BOB ARCTOR (V.O.) Lately, Jerry Fabin stands all day shaking bugs from his hair. The doctor says there...
2Theme Stated
Scenes 22-23 / 5% target
46% At the Lion’s Club, Bob (as Fred) warns about addiction preying on youth, stating the theme of societal destruction by substance abuse.
BOB ARCTOR ... calculatedly addicted, for profit, by those who would destroy this society. We do not yet...
3Set-Up
Scenes 2-9 / 10% target
50% Early montage of Coca-Cola logistics and Jerry Fabin’s escalating infestation mania sets the world, stakes, and Bob’s surveillance assignment.
The windows are spray-painted over with silver paint. A
4Catalyst
Scene 18 / 12% target
44% Charles Freck enters on Jerry’s bizarre shower scene, marking Bob’s first interaction with his drug-addled friends and catalyzing his double life.
JERRY FABIN I got to get the aphids.
5Debate
Scenes 20-21 / 20% target
43% Freck and Jerry’s tense bug-hunting and Freck’s fear off-screen debate the sanity and danger of this world.
CHARLES FRECK What do we get for these? I mean, does the doctor pay a bounty or something?...
6Break into Two
Scenes 22-23 / 25% target
45% Bob officially breaks into Act II by delivering his scrambled speech in the scramble suit, committing to his undercover role.
FAT BUSINESSMAN (CONT'D) Now you will notice that you can barely see this individual becuase he is wearing...
7B Story
Scenes 26-27 / 30% target
42% Charles Freck’s awkward reunion with Donna establishes the romantic B-story and alternate emotional stakes.
CHARLES FRECK (CONT'D) Donna!
8Fun and Games
Scenes 30-31 / 40% target
46% Bob’s undercover entry into New-Path and feigned desperation show the “fun”—his cosmic infiltration game begins.
BOB ARCTOR I'm in a bad place. I wanna turn myself in for treatment.
9Midpoint
Scene 39 / 50% target
44% Hank reveals Bob’s EEG report and co-opts Fred to surveil Arctor’s house, raising the stakes—Bob is now fully compromised.
HANK That covers Barris and Freck. Let's see, I guess we can write Jerry Fabin off.
10Bad Guys Close In
Scene 45 / 65% target
47% Arctor’s perfect life imagery collapses when he injures himself and bitterly monologues, as internal and external pressures mount.
BOB ARCTOR FUCKING POPCORN POPPER! FUCK!
11All Is Lost
Scene 46 / 75% target
45% In voice-over, Bob abandons his old life, symbolizing the darkest moment of identity loss.
BOB ARCTOR (V.O.) (CONT'D) So I ended that life and started this one. Now I dwell in a...
12Dark Night of the Soul
Scene 49 / 80% target
44% Barris’s lunatic sabotage theory prompts Bob’s despair—he’s truly unmoored, disordered and questioning reality.
BOB ARCTOR (V.O.) Now I dwell in an ugly... disordered world. But this very disorder... permits... the... unpredictable...
13Break into Three
Scene 68 / 85% target
46% Hank’s briefing that Fred is Arctor forces the final push—Bob must face his undoing and be delivered to New-Path.
HANK Here are the locations of the eight scanners. We transmit to a safe house down the block...
14Finale
Scene 118 / 95% target
48% Bob collapses at New-Path reception, ravaged by Substance D, confronting the irreversibility of his transformation.
NEW-PATH #1 What is it?
15Final Image
Scene 136 / 99% target
49% In the Napa cornfield, Bob glimpses the impossible blue flower, a lingering hallucination and testament to his lost perception.
EXECUTIVE DIRECTOR You're seeing the flower of the future, Bruce. But not for you.