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A MONSTER CALLS script analysis

A MONSTER CALLS script - Save the Cat beat sheet analysis

A grieving boy, Conor, is haunted by nightmares and visits from a monstrous tree, which tells him stories while he struggles to cope with his mother’s terminal illness. As his life unravels—school bullying, family tension, and emotional outbursts—Conor learns to face his fears and say goodbye. The climax sees him reconciled with his loss and visiting his mother’s grave.

85 Save the Cat fit score 82% analysis confidence / 30 parsed scenes

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1

Opening Image

Scene 1 / Page 1 / 1% target

80%

Establishes a dark, foreboding tone with the Monster roaring on the churchyard hilltop.

2

Theme Stated

Scene 2 / Page 1 / 5% target

75%

Conor’s mother soothes him, hinting at the struggle to accept comfort and confront grief.

You’re okay. You’re okay.
3

Set-Up

Scenes 3-9 / Pages 1-2 / 10% target

80%

We see Conor’s nightly vigilance over his sick mother, his isolation at school, and the brewing domestic strain.

4

Catalyst

Scene 4 / Page 1 / 12% target

85%

The Monster’s first personal visit to Conor’s window propels him into a new, unsettling reality.

I have come to get you, Conor O’Malley.
5

Debate

Scene 5 / Page 1 / 20% target

80%

Conor and the Monster confront each other’s fears, as Conor defiantly denies being afraid.

No. Not of you, anyway.
6

Break into Two

Scene 10 / Page 2 / 25% target

85%

His mother’s treatment failing news forces Conor into the emotional ‘upside-­down world’ of grief.

The latest treatment’s not doing what it’s supposed to. So they’re going to adjust it, try something else....
7

B Story

Scene 8 / Page 2 / 30% target

78%

Conor’s strained friendship with Lily underscores his emotional barriers and need for connection.

I’m not sorry, and I don’t forgive you.
8

Fun and Games

Scenes 6-7 / Pages 2-3 / 40% target

82%

The Monster shares tales (first tale of the Prince and Queen), showcasing the story’s ‘promise of the premise.’

The next morning, the Prince woke. Arise, my beloved, he said.
9

Midpoint

Scene 11 / Page 3 / 50% target

80%

Conor’s violent outburst in Grandma’s sitting room while the Monster judges marks a false victory that feels hollow.

As destruction goes, this is remarkably pitiful.
10

Bad Guys Close In

Scene 15 / Page 4 / 65% target

78%

Conor’s father arrives with more dire updates about his mother, tightening the emotional noose.

11

All Is Lost

Scene 22 / Page 5 / 75% target

84%

His father announces he must leave for his other family, leaving Conor utterly alone.

I’ve got some bad news, Con. I have to fly back home tonight.
12

Dark Night of the Soul

Scene 23 / Page 5 / 80% target

80%

Conor’s solitary vigil for the Monster highlights his despair and fear he may lose everything.

13

Break into Three

Scene 26 / Page 6 / 85% target

82%

A heart-to-heart with Grandma in the car reawakens Conor’s courage to face reality.

It doesn’t matter. It doesn’t matter.
14

Finale

Scene 28 / Pages 6-7 / 95% target

85%

Conor finally confronts his mother’s death, saying goodbye in the hospital with the Monster’s support.

It’s okay. You’re in time.
15

Final Image

Scene 30 / Page 7 / 99% target

88%

Conor stands at his mother’s grave on the hilltop, mirroring the opening but now in acceptance of his loss.